Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Well I think it depends on what the things is. If it is very interesting such like Nova I will memory it, but if it boring I can't remember it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Although I think I forgot my laptop when I go out from my home this day, it is not very convenient for me to work. I think I don't want to this together again.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, I think I have to get up early every day and go to the company to work. It is very important to for me. I can't forget it.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually write important things in the Notes app on my phone because I can set reminds and check them anytime. This might helps me avoid forgetting task when I'm busy. For example I set an alarm.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、語法正確並直接回應問題。句子應控制在最多五句內,主句明確表達觀點,隨後用一到兩句具體例子或原因來支持。注意動詞形式(memorise, remember)和冠詞(the, a)的使用,以及連接詞使語意更流暢。
Ví dụ: It depends on the topic — I remember things better if they are interesting. For example, I can easily recall facts about space documentaries, but I struggle to remember boring details from textbooks.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需更直接且語法正確。避免使用不必要的連接詞(如Although)開頭造成語意不清,並用過去式描述已發生的事件,然後說明後果與未來改變。句子不宜冗長或重複。
Ví dụ: Yes, once I forgot my laptop when I left home, which made it impossible to work that day. Since then, I always check my bag before leaving to avoid the same problem.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然簡潔,主句直接回應問題,然後補充具體細節或習慣。注意介詞和冗餘詞(to for me, I can't forget it)並可加入連接詞使內容更連貫。
Ví dụ: I need to remember to wake up early and get to work on time. To help with this, I set a morning alarm and prepare my clothes and bag the night before.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表達已較清晰但需修正語法與用詞(reminds→reminders, helps→help, task→tasks),並將句子簡潔化,使用連接詞使邏輯更順。可補充一個具體例子說明方法如何有效。
Ví dụ: I usually save important tasks in the Notes app and set reminders or alarms, so I can check them anytime. For example, I set a reminder to submit reports before the deadline, which prevents me from forgetting when I'm busy.
× Well I think it depends on what the things is.
✓ Well, I think it depends on what the thing is.
句子结构错误并且主谓不一致。原句中用复数名词"things"但后面用单数系动词"is",导致不一致。建议保持名词和动词在数上一致:如果指单一事物用"thing"搭配"is",如果指多样事物则用"things are"。此外在口语中在句首加逗号更自然。
× If it is very interesting such like Nova I will memory it, but if it boring I can't remember it.
✓ If it is very interesting, such as Nova, I will remember it, but if it's boring I can't remember it.
主要是单复数和词形错误:"memory"是名词,应使用动词"remember";"such like"不地道,应为"such as";缺少动词"is"在"if it's boring"处。还修正了标点和连词使句子更清晰。建议记住常见搭配:动词/名词要分清,使用固定短语"such as"表示例子。
× Although I think I forgot my laptop when I go out from my home this day, it is not very convenient for me to work.
✓ Although I think I forgot my laptop when I went out of my home that day, it was not very convenient for me to work.
时态错误:叙述过去发生的事情应使用过去时,原句中混用了现在时"go"和过去时"forgot"。同时时间词"this day"在讲过去事件时应改为"that day","go out from"应为更自然的"went out of"或"left"。建议描述过去事件时全句使用过去时并注意时间词呼应。
× I think I don't want to this together again.
✓ I don't want to do this again.
句子结构错误:缺少动词"do"且不需要"together"(意思是"不要再这样做")。原句混乱且多余词语,改为简洁的否定句更自然。建议写作时把句子拆清主语、谓语和宾语,避免多余词。
× Well, I think I have to get up early every day and go to the company to work. It is very important to for me.
✓ Well, I think I have to get up early every day and go to the company to work. It is very important for me.
多余介词/词序错误:原句包含多余的介词"to"在"important to for me"中,正确应为"important for me"或"important to me"。建议牢记固定搭配:"important to sb."或"important for sb."均可,但不能同时使用两者。
× I can't forget it.
✓ I can't forget it.
该句本身语法正确(主谓一致正确),无需修改。保留原句即可。
× Well, I usually write important things in the Notes app on my phone because I can set reminds and check them anytime.
✓ Well, I usually write important things in the Notes app on my phone because I can set reminders and check them anytime.
动名词/词形错误:"reminds"是动词形式,需名词"reminders"表示提醒事项。原句也可以使用动词短语"set reminders"。建议区分名词和动词形式,并使用正确名词复数表示多个提醒。
× This might helps me avoid forgetting task when I'm busy.
✓ This might help me avoid forgetting tasks when I'm busy.
动词形式错误:情态动词"might"后应接动词原形"help",不能加-s。另外"forgetting task"需复数或加冠词改为"forgetting tasks"或"forgetting a task"。建议情态动词后使用动词原形,并注意可数名词的单复数形式。
× For example I set an alarm.
✓ For example, I set an alarm.
句子时态在上下文中可以是现在习惯性或过去一次性都可。如果指现在的习惯更自然用现在时"I set an alarm"也可改为现在进行或现在简单。这里只加了标点,语法可接受。如需强调习惯可改为"For example, I set an alarm every time." 建议注意句间停顿和标点,使表达更清晰。