Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 유창성을 향상시키기 위해 반복과 불필요한 말(예: "my my", 망설임)을 제거하고, 주제문 다음에 간단한 이유와 한두 개의 구체적 예를 연결하세요. 또한 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 제한하고 자연스러운 연결어(therefore, for example, for instance)를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I can recall details from social media posts better than most people I know. For example, I often remember photos and comments my friends shared on Instagram, so they are usually surprised when I bring them up later.

Gợi ý: 핵심 아이디어를 바로 제시하고 문법(시제, 소유격, 어순)을 정확히 하세요. 망설임과 불완전한 표현을 줄이고, 한두 문장으로 이유나 결과를 덧붙여 명확하게 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I once forgot a family member's birthday, which was embarrassing. I think I neglect some family dates because I am more focused on friends and busy with daily tasks.

Gợi ý: 응답을 더 구체적으로 하고 불필요한 표현(예: 'uh', 'it is not easy to me')을 제거하세요. 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 구체적 항목(예: appointments, bills, deadlines)과 그 중요성을 간단히 설명하세요. 연결어(especially, such as)를 정확히 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: In my daily life I need to remember birthdays, homework deadlines and appointments. These things are important because missing them can upset people or cause me to lose marks, so I try to keep them organised.

Gợi ý: 방법을 설명할 때 더 명확한 어휘와 올바른 문법을 사용하세요. 한두 문장으로 요점(방법)과 그 이유 또는 효과를 연결하고, 반복되는 단어와 망설임을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually use the calendar app on my phone to record important dates, and I set reminders for each event. I also make these dates my phone wallpaper so I see them often, which helps me avoid forgetting them.

× My my friends are surprised sometimes because I remember almost everything they posted on Instagram and.

✓ My friends are surprised sometimes because I remember almost everything they post on Instagram.

Duplicate 'My my' is a mistake and 'they posted' should be 'they post' to indicate habitual action; use present simple for regular occurrences. Also remove trailing 'and' which is incomplete.

× I always forgot my family's birthday.

✓ I always forget my family's birthdays.

Use present simple 'forget' to express a habitual action; 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' because multiple family members or repeated occurrences are implied.

× Uh, this, uh, I don't know why the remember my families, uh, things is difficult for me because I already familiar with my friends, our family.

✓ I don't know why remembering my family's things is difficult for me because I am already familiar with my friends and family.

Use gerund 'remembering' after 'why'; 'my families' should be 'my family's' (possessive singular) or 'my family' and 'things' needs clearer reference; 'I already familiar' requires 'I am already familiar'; 'our family' changed to 'and family' to make sense.

× I think, uh, someone's birthday or some special issue like such as deadline for homework.

✓ I think someone's birthday or special things such as homework deadlines.

'Some special issue like such as' is redundant and awkward; use 'things such as' or 'such as' and pluralize 'deadline' to 'deadlines' for general statements.

× I need to remember that those in my daily life, but it is not easy to me.

✓ I need to remember those in my daily life, but it is not easy for me.

Remove unnecessary 'that'; 'not easy to me' should be 'not easy for me' for correct preposition use.

× I usually use calendars on my phone to keep track update for especially important occasions.

✓ I usually use the calendar on my phone to keep track of especially important occasions.

'keep track update' is incorrect; use 'keep track of' plus noun; 'calendars' singular 'the calendar' is more natural; word order adjusted.

× I set them as my phone's wallpaper so that I won't forget them it it is the most effective way to remember important things.

✓ I set them as my phone's wallpaper so that I won't forget them; it is the most effective way to remember important things.

Remove duplicated 'it'; separate clauses with a semicolon or period; ensure pronoun 'them' refers to the events; article usage is fine but punctuation and repetition caused error.