Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并减少冗词，控制在最多五句；把观点先说清楚（主题句），然后用具体例子或原因支持，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如，用“short-term”与“long-term”对比，避免口头语“umm/you know”。

Ví dụ: I am fairly good at short-term memorising but struggle with long-term retention. For example, I can remember a new phone number after seeing it, but if I don't review it I soon forget it. Therefore, I usually revise information several times to move it into long-term memory.

Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理，用主题句开头，随后提供具体细节并用连接词说明结果。减少口头语，注意动词时态和连贯性（例如用“fortunately”作为连接词，而不是插入语）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once missed an assignment deadline at university. I explained the situation to my professor and, fortunately, he accepted my late submission after I gave a reasonable explanation. Since then, I always set reminders to avoid repeating the mistake.

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并使用流畅的连词。避免模糊词如“input”，改用更恰当的词汇（e.g. contact details, course material）。最多五句，先给主题句，再列举两三项并简短说明原因。

Ví dụ: I need to remember course material and important contact details in daily life. For instance, remembering key points from textbooks helps me study efficiently and improve my exam results. I also keep track of deadlines and assignment guidelines because punctuality is essential for good grades.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，但应简化表达并使用正确语法（例如 “write notes” 而不是 “write down to the notes”）。可以加入连接词并说明效果或举例，控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: I usually write notes or use reminder apps on my phone to remember important tasks. For example, I set calendar alerts for assignment deadlines so I receive notifications in advance. This method helps me stay organised and avoid missing important dates.

× It depends because you know, when it comes to short memories, I'm very good at it.

✓ It depends because, you know, when it comes to short-term memory, I'm very good at it.

句中“short memories”用法不当，应使用不可数名词短语“short-term memory”（短期记忆）。这是名词形式/词组用法问题，需使用正确的名词搭配以符合习惯表达。建议使用“short-term memory”或“short-term memories”根据语境，但通常说“short-term memory”。

× I can remember things when I first saw it.

✓ I can remember things when I first saw them.

代词与先行词不一致：先行词“things”为复数，指代代词应使用复数“them”，而非单数“it”。中文解释：代词要与被指代的名词在人称和数上保持一致，遇到复数名词使用复数代词。

× But without any review, umm, I will lose it in the long term.

✓ But without any review, I will lose them in the long term.

代词与先行词不一致且时态问题：句中指代前文“things”为复数，应用“them”。时态“will lose”可保留表示将来/长期遗忘，但要与正确代词搭配。中文建议：将“it”改为“them”，并保持“will lose”表达长期遗忘。

× Yes, once I forgot a deadline of my assignment in school and I found my UMM professor and told him my reasons.

✓ Yes, once I forgot the deadline for my assignment at school and I found my UMM professor and told him my reasons.

介词和冠词使用不当（可归为定冠词/介词错误与句子结构）：应使用“the deadline”表示特定截止日期，介词“for my assignment”比“of my assignment”更自然，地点用“at school”。中文建议：把“a deadline of my assignment in school”改为“the deadline for my assignment at school”。

× UMM and fortunately he accepted my submission in the end.

✓ Fortunately, he accepted my submission in the end.

句子结构和连词问题：句首多余“UMM and”口头语和并列连词导致结构不通顺，应删除“UMM and”并把“fortunately”放在句首作为插入语。中文建议：去掉多余口语填充词，保持句子结构简洁。

× I need to remember the input and contacts and knowledge in textbook so that I can efficiently to review those things and get better grades in examination.

✓ I need to remember the input, contacts, and the knowledge in textbooks so that I can efficiently review those things and get better grades in exams.

多个问题：1) 介词与冠词使用（grammar types 11 和 22）：应使用“the knowledge in textbooks”或“knowledge from textbooks”；“in examination”不自然，应为“in exams”。2) 不定式误用（多余的“to”）：动词“review”前不应有“to”因为前面有情态/目的结构“so that I can review”。3) 复数一致：将“textbook”和“examination”改为复数更符合常规表达。中文建议：把“knowledge in textbook”改为“knowledge in textbooks”，“efficiently to review”改为“efficiently review”，“in examination”改为“in exams”。

× And then also need to remember the schedule, umm like the assignment guideline.

✓ And I also need to remember the schedule, like the assignment guidelines.

句子缺主语并且数一致问题：缺少主语“I”，应为完整句子“I also need...”。此外“guideline”应与“assignment”对应使用复数“guidelines”更常见。中文建议：补上主语并使用复数形式“guidelines”。

× Sometimes I write down to the notes or take notes on my phone like some reminder apps so they can put the notification when the schedule is coming and it can remind me of those things.

✓ Sometimes I write notes down or take notes on my phone using reminder apps so they can send notifications when the schedule is coming and remind me of those things.

动词及短语搭配问题（动名词/固定搭配）：1) “write down to the notes”不正确，正确表达为“write notes down”或“write things down”。2) “like some reminder apps”改为“using reminder apps”更自然。3) 动词一致及代词指代：应用复数动词和代词，“apps”与“they can send notifications”一致，且“it can remind”改为“remind”。中文建议：使用固定搭配“write notes down”或“write something down”，用“using reminder apps”，并保证动词与主语一致。