Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 질문에 직접적으로 응답하고 있지만, 문장이 반복적이고 문법·표현 오류가 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 주제문을 말한 뒤, linking words(예: because, for example)로 이유나 구체적 예를 붙이세요. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 시제 일치를 신경 쓰세요. 예) 주절에서 현재 능력을 말하고, 과거 경험은 ‘when I was young’처럼 한 문장으로 간결히 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am fairly good at memorizing things. For example, when I was a student I could remember key points for exams by reviewing my notes every evening.

Gợi ý: 답변은 사건을 말하려 했으나 말이 끊기고 어휘 선택과 문법이 혼란스러워 이해하기 어렵습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 사실을 밝히고, 시간·장소·대상 같은 구체적 디테일을 순서대로 연결하세요. 불필요한 말버릇(uh, um)을 줄이고 과거 시제 문장을 완결되게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to send an important document when I applied for a resident visa to New Zealand. I missed the deadline to post my application, so the immigration office later contacted me to request it again.

Gợi ý: 질문에 답했지만 어휘와 문장 구조가 어색합니다. 먼저 한 문장으로 핵심(예: study schedule)을 말하고, 왜 중요한지 또는 어떻게 관리하는지 구체적 예를 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 반복을 피하고 명확한 단어(‘study schedule’, ‘exams’)를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I need to remember my study schedule, especially the subjects I must review for upcoming exams. For example, I write a daily to-do list and check off each topic after I finish studying it.

Gợi ý: 답변이 모호하고 문장이 미완성되어 의사 전달이 잘 되지 않습니다. 방법을 설명할 때는 순서를 갖춘 문장(예: I use a checklist, then I set reminders)으로 말하세요. 구체적인 방법(앱, 알람, 노트)을 예로 들고 linking words(then, so, because)를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually use a checklist and set phone reminders to remember important things. For instance, I make a note the night before and set an alarm in the morning to remind me of urgent tasks.

× Yes, I like to say I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I would say I'm good at memorizing things.

Sentence uses 'like to say' which is unnatural; use 'would say' to express opinion. Use modal 'would' for polite estimation.

× Especially when I was young.

✓ Especially when I was young.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a short answer referring to the past. No change needed, but ensure it connects to a full sentence for clarity.

× I used to have a good memorizing skill when I was studying.

✓ I used to have a good memory when I was studying.

Use of 'memorizing skill' is unnatural; 'memory' is the correct noun. This fits past habitual 'used to' and improves collocation.

× So when I have a examination then I always memorize key points.

✓ So when I had an examination, I always memorized the key points.

Tense should match past context ('had', 'memorized'). Article 'a examination' is incorrect; use 'an examination'. Add 'the' before 'key points' to specify.

× Yes, I have uh, forgotten something information uh, there was a time when I was applying for my uh, per month to resident visa to immigration in New Zealand, The time I need to send my application to the address and after a few weeks later they send the.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten some information. There was a time when I was applying for my resident visa to immigrate to New Zealand. I needed to send my application to an address, and after a few weeks they sent it back.

Multiple problems: 'something information' should be 'some information' (quantifier). Use present perfect 'have forgotten' is OK. 'per month to resident visa to immigration' is incorrect phrase; use 'to apply for my resident visa to immigrate to New Zealand'. Verb tenses need consistency: 'I needed' for past requirement. 'after a few weeks later' is redundant; use 'after a few weeks'. Missing object for 'sent' — add 'it back' or 'it'.

× What I need to remember in my daily life is the study list, especially the subject to list for my IRE to examine exam.

✓ What I need to remember in my daily life is my study list, especially the subjects to study for my IRE exam.

Article and noun forms: use 'my study list' not 'the study list'. 'subject to list' is incorrect; use 'subjects to study'. 'IRE to examine exam' is incorrect repetition; use 'IRE exam'.

× So that's my important things to remember in my daily life for now.

✓ So those are the important things I need to remember in my daily life right now.

Subject-verb agreement and word order: 'that's' singular with 'important things' (plural) incorrect; use 'those are'. Clearer phrasing 'I need to remember' and 'right now'.

× I remember important thing how umm, I normally think every single time my important thing.

✓ To remember important things, I usually think about them all the time.

Grammar issues: 'remember important thing how' is ungrammatical. Use infinitive 'To remember' and plural 'things'. 'think every single time my important thing' unclear; 'think about them all the time' is natural.

× So I normally set the old one for that.

✓ So I normally set reminders for that.

'Set the old one' is unclear and incorrect. Use 'set reminders' as a common collocation for remembering tasks.

× In the morning when I wake up, I set a.

✓ In the morning when I wake up, I set an alarm or review my to-do list.

Original sentence is incomplete ('I set a.'). Provide a complete object: 'an alarm' or 'review my to-do list' to show intended action.