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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

When I was very young I can remember a lot of English vocabulary and also something special things and so on. But now I think I'm too old to memorize the important things, I always just forgot.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, uh, last time I forgot to give something to my husband, so this thing is very important. And now I still didn't remember what exactly the stuff is and also it's tracked me.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember the regularly study every day because I need to learn more English knowledge to practice my teaching skills. So every day I need to have vocabulary quiz and reading quiz.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Actually I always forget something important things, so to deal with this problem I always write the notes in my books or just do the memories on my phone.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 答题需更直接且语法正确。开头应直接回应问题(肯定或否定),并用一到两句简要解释原因,避免冗长或不连贯的表达。注意时态和单复数(例如“could remember”而非“can remember”用于过去),并用连词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I used to be quite good at memorising words when I was young because I studied English every day. However, these days I often forget things unless I review them regularly, so my memory is not as reliable as it used to be.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 回答要具体并且语法准确。直接用一两句描述事件和结果,避免口头语(如“uh”)和不清晰的代词。使用正确的时态(例如“I still don't remember”)。如果提到影响,说明具体后果。

Ví dụ: Yes. Recently I forgot to give an important document to my husband, and I still don’t remember exactly what it was. Because of that, he had to delay some paperwork, which was inconvenient for both of us.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 表达要更地道、简洁并注意句子结构。先给出主题句,再用一到两句具体说明如何安排和为什么重要。避免冗余词和重复结构(例如“need to remember the regularly study”应为“need to study regularly”)。

Ví dụ: I need to remember to study regularly to improve my English and my teaching skills. For example, I schedule a short vocabulary quiz and a reading exercise every day to stay consistent.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并分两部分:先陈述常用方法,然后举例说明细节或频率。注意用词精确(如“write notes”而不是“write the notes”,“use my phone’s reminders”而非“do the memories on my phone”)。

Ví dụ: I usually write notes in my books and set reminders on my phone to remember important things. For instance, I put calendar alerts for meetings and use a notes app to list tasks I must complete.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× When I was very young I can remember a lot of English vocabulary and also something special things and so on.

When I was very young I could remember a lot of English vocabulary and some special things, and so on.

问题类型:过去时错误(5)。句子描述过去的情况,应使用过去时态;原句使用了现在时的 'can' 不符合时间背景。建议将 'can' 改为过去式 'could',并将 'something special things' 改为更自然的 'some special things',以修正数量词与名词搭配。

Present tense issue

× But now I think I'm too old to memorize the important things, I always just forgot.

But now I think I'm too old to memorize important things; I always just forget.

问题类型:现在时错误(6)。句首说的是现在的状态,应使用现在时态。原句 'I always just forgot' 使用了过去式 'forgot',应改为现在时 'forget'。另外将 'the important things' 改为无冠词的 'important things' 更符合习惯用法;用分号或句号分开更清晰。

Past tense issue

× Yes, uh, last time I forgot to give something to my husband, so this thing is very important.

Yes, uh, last time I forgot to give something to my husband, so that was very important.

问题类型:过去时错误(5)。句中事件发生在过去,后半句应使用过去时 'was' 而不是现在时 'is'。同时将 'this thing' 改为指代过去事件的 'that' 更自然。

Present perfect / Past tense issue

× And now I still didn't remember what exactly the stuff is and also it's tracked me.

And now I still don't remember exactly what the item was, and it is still tracking me.

问题类型:现在时/过去时混用(5/6)。原句 'I still didn't remember' 用了过去式但前有 'now',应使用现在时 'don't remember'。'the stuff' 不够具体,可改为 'the item' 或 'what it was'。第二部分 'it's tracked me' 语法错误,正确表达如果是现在持续被跟踪应为 'it is still tracking me';如果想说它让我想起来应改为 'it still troubles me'。建议根据实际意思选择合适表达。

Incorrect use of adverbs / Verb + -ing form

× I need to remember the regularly study every day because I need to learn more English knowledge to practice my teaching skills.

I need to remember to study regularly every day because I need to learn more English to improve my teaching skills.

问题类型:副词使用/动词 + -ing(20/8)。原句 'remember the regularly study' 结构错误,应为 'remember to study regularly'(remember 后接不定式或动名词,根据语义选不定式);'English knowledge' 不自然,改为 'English';'practice my teaching skills' 改为 'improve my teaching skills' 更符合语境。

Article errors / Plural issue

× So every day I need to have vocabulary quiz and reading quiz.

So every day I need to have a vocabulary quiz and a reading quiz.

问题类型:冠词错误/单复数(22/1)。可数名词 'vocabulary quiz' 和 'reading quiz' 需要冠词 'a',或者改为复数 'vocabulary quizzes and reading quizzes' 取决于是否每天都有一次。

Verb + -ing form / Article errors

× Actually I always forget something important things, so to deal with this problem I always write the notes in my books or just do the memories on my phone.

Actually I always forget some important things, so to deal with this problem I always write notes in my books or just make reminders on my phone.

问题类型:动词 + -ing/冠词错误(8/22)。原句 'forget something important things' 是重复和搭配错误,改为 'forget some important things'。'write the notes' 一般用 'write notes'(无冠词)更自然;'do the memories' 不是地道表达,应改为 'make reminders' 或 'set reminders'(用手机设置提醒)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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