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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?

Thí sinh

No, I don't like eating chocolate. When I was a child, I don't like sweet food and chocolate is sweet food, so I don't like chocolate.

Giám khảo

How often do you eat chocolate?

Thí sinh

Oh it depends when Sometimes I remember I have a lot of time to eat chocolate, maybe I will buy some, but if I not remember it I won't eat for months.

Giám khảo

Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't. As said before, I didn't like sweet foods when I was a child. I prefer to eat more reeds and meat instead of sweet food like chocolate.

Giám khảo

Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?

Thí sinh

That's because chocolate have lots of benefit for our body. That's why sometimes I eat chocolate even I don't like sweet food. Chocolate can make our eat less food. It is benefit for losing.

Giám khảo

What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?

Thí sinh

While Hydropathy said to black chocolate because it isn't sweaty at all and I do like sweaty food.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?

Thí sinh

Yes, both time it is a good gift. For example, I gave chocolate to my little brother as gifts, but if somebody give chocolate to me as gift and he gave me some sweet chocolate, I don't really like it. I will remember that.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答时时态使用不准确,且表达重复。建议使用正确的时态,并简洁表达原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I have never enjoyed sweet foods since I was a child.

How often do you eat chocolate?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子,明确频率。

Ví dụ: I eat chocolate occasionally, maybe once every few months when I remember to buy some.

Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当(如'reeds'),建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't eat chocolate often because I preferred eating vegetables and meat rather than sweet foods.

Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用正确语法,具体说明巧克力受欢迎的原因。

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and can improve mood, which makes people enjoy it.

What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,词汇错误严重。建议学习正确表达喜欢的巧克力口味及原因。

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is less sweet and has a rich taste.

Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯,语法错误较多。建议使用连贯句子表达观点并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, chocolate is a good gift. For example, I once gave chocolate to my little brother. However, I prefer dark chocolate when receiving it as a gift.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× When I was a child, I don't like sweet food and chocolate is sweet food, so I don't like chocolate.

When I was a child, I didn't like sweet food and chocolate is sweet food, so I didn't like chocolate.

句子中描述过去的情况,应该使用过去时态,'don't like' 应改为 'didn't like'。

Present tense issue

× Oh it depends when Sometimes I remember I have a lot of time to eat chocolate, maybe I will buy some, but if I not remember it I won't eat for months.

Oh, it depends. Sometimes I remember I have a lot of time to eat chocolate, maybe I will buy some, but if I don't remember it, I won't eat for months.

句子中缺少逗号分隔,且 'if I not remember' 应为 'if I don't remember',因为否定形式需要助动词 'do'。

Past tense issue

× I prefer to eat more reeds and meat instead of sweet food like chocolate.

I preferred to eat more rice and meat instead of sweet food like chocolate.

描述过去的习惯,动词 'prefer' 应使用过去式 'preferred'。另外,'reeds' 应为 'rice',但这属于词汇错误,不在语法问题列表中。

Singular and plural issue

× That's because chocolate have lots of benefit for our body.

That's because chocolate has lots of benefits for our body.

主语 'chocolate' 是不可数名词,谓语动词应使用单数形式 'has','benefit' 应为复数 'benefits'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Chocolate can make our eat less food.

Chocolate can make us eat less food.

'our' 是形容词性物主代词,不能直接作动词宾语,应该用宾格代词 'us'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It is benefit for losing.

It is beneficial for losing weight.

'benefit' 是名词,形容词形式应为 'beneficial',且表达更完整应为 'losing weight'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× While Hydropathy said to black chocolate because it isn't sweaty at all and I do like sweaty food.

While hydrotherapy recommends black chocolate because it isn't sweet at all and I do like sweet food.

'Hydropathy' 应为 'hydrotherapy','said to' 用法错误,应改为 'recommends','sweaty' 应为 'sweet'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, both time it is a good gift.

Yes, both times it is a good gift.

'both time' 应为复数形式 'both times'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× For example, I gave chocolate to my little brother as gifts, but if somebody give chocolate to me as gift and he gave me some sweet chocolate, I don't really like it.

For example, I gave chocolate to my little brother as a gift, but if somebody gives chocolate to me as a gift and he gives me some sweet chocolate, I don't really like it.

'give' 应用第三人称单数形式 'gives','gift' 前应加不定冠词 'a'。

Past tense issue

× I will remember that.

I remembered that.

根据上下文,描述过去的经历,动词应使用过去时 'remembered'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
SweetSugary; Fragrant; Dulcet; Pleasant
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