Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because there are many types to choose from, such as sweet or bitter. Eating chocolate makes me feel happy and helps me forget my worries.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明频率并给出具体原因，避免语法错误和冗长。

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate twice a month because it is expensive in Taiwan. Also, chocolate is very sweet, so I try not to eat too much.

Gợi ý: 时态使用错误，句子结构混乱，表达不清楚。建议使用过去时，简洁表达原因，并注意语法。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, my parents did not allow me to eat chocolate because they believed it would make me too active and affect my eating and sleeping.

Gợi ý: 表达中有词汇错误（bubble应为popular），句子较长且结构不够清晰，建议使用正确词汇并分句表达观点。

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because there are many varieties, like sweet and bitter types. Also, eating chocolate makes people feel happier and helps them forget their troubles.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有少量语法错误（less sweeter应为less sweet，help应为helps），建议注意形容词比较级和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: My favorite flavor is dark chocolate because it is less sweet than milk chocolate and has a rich, slightly bitter taste. I also like it because it helps me stay awake and focus when I study.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当（hear应为give，lover应为loved one），建议简化句子并使用正确词汇。

Ví dụ: I think giving chocolate as a gift is a good idea. My friends often give chocolates to their loved ones to show affection, and we also give chocolate to cheer up someone who is sad.

× I really like to eat chocolate because there are many kind of chocolates and it can choose sweet or bitter chocolates you want and after eating chocolate you will feel very happy and you can forgot many things that let you feel sad.

✓ I really like to eat chocolate because there are many kinds of chocolates and you can choose sweet or bitter chocolates you want. After eating chocolate, you will feel very happy and you can forget many things that make you feel sad.

“many kind of chocolates”中“kind”应为复数形式“kinds”，因为“many”修饰复数名词。句中“it can choose”主语错误，应为“you can choose”。“forgot”应为动词原形“forget”，因为前面有情态动词“can”。“let you feel sad”应改为“make you feel sad”，表达更准确。

× I really like to eat chocolate because there are many kind of chocolates and it can choose sweet or bitter chocolates you want and after eating chocolate you will feel very happy and you can forgot many things that let you feel sad.

✓ I really like to eat chocolate because there are many kinds of chocolates and you can choose sweet or bitter chocolates you want. After eating chocolate, you will feel very happy and you can forget many things that make you feel sad.

“can forgot”中“forgot”应为动词原形“forget”，因为情态动词后应接动词原形。

× I usually eat chocolate twice a month because in Taiwan chocolate isn't cheap and it's too sweet and if after you're eating it you need to drink a lot of water and if you eat too much chocolate you will be heavy and.

✓ I usually eat chocolate twice a month because in Taiwan chocolate isn't cheap and it's too sweet. After eating it, you need to drink a lot of water, and if you eat too much chocolate, you will become heavy.

句子结构混乱，需拆分为多个句子。句尾“you will be heavy and.”不完整，应改为“you will become heavy”。

× Now when I'm in childhood my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because the studies say when if child eat chocolate they will be very activity and can quiet to eat or sleep.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because studies say that if children eat chocolate, they will be very active and cannot quiet down to eat or sleep.

“Now when I'm in childhood”时态和表达错误，应改为过去时“when I was a child”。“child”应为复数“children”。“activity”应为形容词“active”。“can quiet to eat or sleep”表达错误，应为“cannot quiet down to eat or sleep”。

× Now when I'm in childhood my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because the studies say when if child eat chocolate they will be very activity and can quiet to eat or sleep.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because studies say that if children eat chocolate, they will be very active and cannot quiet down to eat or sleep.

“child”应为复数形式“children”，因为指一般情况的复数。

× Now when I'm in childhood my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because the studies say when if child eat chocolate they will be very activity and can quiet to eat or sleep.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because studies say that if children eat chocolate, they will be very active and cannot quiet down to eat or sleep.

“activity”是名词，句中应使用形容词“active”来描述状态。

× I think the reason why chocolate is bubble around the world is because there are many varieties to choose from such as sweets or bitter types and after eating chocolates many people will feel happier and helps them forget about things that make me sad.

✓ I think the reason why chocolate is popular around the world is because there are many varieties to choose from, such as sweet or bitter types. After eating chocolate, many people will feel happier and it helps them forget about things that make them sad.

“bubble”用词错误，应为“popular”。“sweets”应为形容词“sweet”修饰“types”。“helps them forget about things that make me sad”中“me”应为“them”，保持主语一致。

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it is less sweeter than milk chocolate, and it has a rich and slightly bitter taste that I really enjoyed.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it is less sweet than milk chocolate, and it has a rich and slightly bitter taste that I really enjoy.

“less sweeter”是错误的比较级表达，应为“less sweet”。“enjoyed”时态错误，应为现在时“enjoy”，因为表达的是一般喜好。

× Additionally, dark chocolate help me stay awake and focus when I need to study.

✓ Additionally, dark chocolate helps me stay awake and focus when I need to study.

主语“dark chocolate”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“helps”。

× I think it is good to hear chocolate as gift to others.

✓ I think it is good to give chocolate as a gift to others.

“hear chocolate”用词错误，应为“give chocolate”。“as gift”缺少冠词，应为“as a gift”。

× My friend around me often give chocolates to the lover to show their love and when someone is sad we also give chocolate to to her that wants her to be more happy.

✓ My friends around me often give chocolates to their lovers to show their love, and when someone is sad, we also give chocolate to her to make her happier.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为后文用“their”。“lover”应为复数“lovers”。“to to her that wants her to be more happy”表达重复且错误，应为“to her to make her happier”。“more happy”应为“happier”。