Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like singing because my favorite.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
If this thing is easy, I can land in 5 million because I have lifeless thing that song.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Uh, because I want to improve my personal ability and habit, so I like seeing 4.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, I see the singing can bring happiness to people. Sometime people is bad and they start the singing that environment have change, they change happy and lovely.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,建议直接回答问题并补充原因,避免使用不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰且无逻辑,建议直接回答是否学过唱歌,并简要说明学习经历或感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken singing lessons for a year to improve my vocal skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答不明确且语句混乱,建议明确指出想为谁唱歌,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达有一定的观点,但语法和用词错误较多,建议使用更准确的句子表达观点,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it lifts people's spirits and creates a joyful atmosphere.
× Yeah, I like singing because my favorite.
✓ Yeah, I like singing because it is my favorite.
句子中缺少主语,导致表达不完整。需要加上代词"it"来指代"singing",使句子完整。
× If this thing is easy, I can land in 5 million because I have lifeless thing that song.
✓ If this thing is easy, I can earn 5 million because I have a lifeless thing that sings.
句子结构混乱,"land in 5 million"应为"earn 5 million","lifeless thing that song"语法错误,应为"a lifeless thing that sings"。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。
× Uh, because I want to improve my personal ability and habit, so I like seeing 4.
✓ Uh, because I want to improve my personal ability and habits, so I like singing for four people.
"seeing 4"表达不清,推测为"singing for four people",且"habit"应为复数"habits"。代词和名词使用不当,需更正。
× Yes, yes, I see the singing can bring happiness to people. Sometime people is bad and they start the singing that environment have change, they change happy and lovely.
✓ Yes, yes, I see that singing can bring happiness to people. Sometimes people are sad and when they start singing, the environment changes; they become happy and lovely.
"Sometime"应为副词"Sometimes","people is"应为复数"people are","the singing that environment have change"结构混乱,需调整为"when they start singing, the environment changes"。动词和名词的单复数形式错误,句子结构不完整。