Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达自己的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“learn”应为“learned”，“saying”应为“sing”。句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned formal singing. I just sing as a hobby to relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整的问题，如“when my daughter asleep”应为“when my daughter is asleep”，句尾不完整。建议注意句子完整性和时态使用。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because I love them. For example, I often sing lullabies when my daughter is asleep.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“critical happiness happiness”表达不清晰。建议使用准确的词汇表达观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Definitely, singing can bring happiness and make people feel more comfortable because songs express various human emotions.

× because seeing makes me feel relaxation and it can express my emotion.

✓ because singing makes me feel relaxed and it can express my emotions.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式表示动作，'seeing' 应改为 'singing'。另外，'relaxation' 是名词，应该用形容词 'relaxed' 来描述感受，'emotion' 应该用复数形式 'emotions' 来表达多种情感。

× No, I have never learn about singing.

✓ No, I have never learned about singing.

现在完成时中，动词应该用过去分词形式，'learn' 应改为 'learned'。

× Umm I just saying as a hobby when I complete a busy day.

✓ Umm I just sing as a hobby when I complete a busy day.

这里 'just' 后面应该接动词原形或动词短语，'saying' 是动名词，语义不符，应改为 'sing'。

× I really love them for example, I often sing a lullaby when my daughter asleep and I usually sing my favorite songs with my.

✓ I really love them. For example, I often sing a lullaby when my daughter is asleep and I usually sing my favorite songs with them.

句子缺少连接词，应该分句；'when my daughter asleep' 缺少动词 'is'；'sing my favorite songs with my' 中 'my' 应为宾格 'them' 指代家人。

× singing can critical happiness happiness and makes people feel more comfortable because many songs express many types of human express emotions.

✓ singing can create happiness and make people feel more comfortable because many songs express many types of human emotions.

'critical happiness happiness' 是错误搭配，应为 'create happiness'；'makes' 应与主语 'singing' 保持一致，但前面改为复数谓语 'make' 以匹配复数主语；'human express emotions' 结构错误，应为 'human emotions'。