Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, provide clear reasons with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me reduce stress and boosts my confidence. Moreover, singing motivates me and allows me to express my emotions effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific about your practice.

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I practice singing regularly. When I feel tired, singing helps me reduce stress and boost my confidence by expressing my emotions.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to avoid repeating the same points and use linking words to make your answer smoother. Also, correct verb forms and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Singing is my hobby, and I want to sing for my mom because she is my inspiration. It would be incredible to express my passion for singing by performing a song dedicated to her.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Use clear and concise sentences with appropriate linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about how singing brings happiness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. When someone is happy, they often sing or listen to music, which enhances their joyful feelings.

× Yes, I like singing because it reduce my all of stress and give me a confidence and motivation.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it reduces all of my stress and gives me confidence and motivation.

The verbs 'reduce' and 'give' need to agree with the singular subject 'it', so they should be 'reduces' and 'gives'. Also, 'all of stress' should be 'all of my stress' and 'a confidence' should be 'confidence' as it is uncountable here.

× It gives my knowledge about the confidence and the music.

✓ It gives me knowledge about confidence and music.

The phrase 'gives my knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'gives me knowledge'. Also, 'the confidence' and 'the music' are incorrect here because they refer to general concepts, so the definite article 'the' should be omitted.

× No I have never learned how to sing but it's my practice.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing but I practice it.

The phrase 'it's my practice' is incorrect; it should be 'I practice it' to express the habitual action. Also, a comma is needed after 'No' for correct punctuation.

× I am while I am singing and it reduce my stress and boost my confidence when I am feel tired so I sing a song and express my emotions.

✓ I feel relaxed while I am singing, and it reduces my stress and boosts my confidence. When I feel tired, I sing a song to express my emotions.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'I am while I am singing' is incomplete; it should be 'I feel relaxed while I am singing'. Also, 'reduce' and 'boost' should be 'reduces' and 'boosts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'I am feel tired' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel tired'. The sentence is better split into two for clarity.

× Singing is my hobby and I want to sing for my mom because it's my inspiration and it's is a very incredible thing that I am sing a song for my mom because it's singing is my passion.

✓ Singing is my hobby and I want to sing for my mom because she is my inspiration. It is a very incredible thing to sing a song for my mom because singing is my passion.

The pronoun 'it's' is incorrectly used to refer to 'my mom'; it should be 'she'. Also, 'it's is' is redundant and incorrect. 'I am sing' is incorrect; it should be 'to sing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a way to express emotions of people's and individuals because when a person happy so he sing singing and listening to music with a very happy heart.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a way to express the emotions of people and individuals. When a person is happy, he sings and listens to music with a very happy heart.

The phrase 'emotions of people's and individuals' is incorrect; it should be 'emotions of people and individuals'. 'When a person happy' is missing the verb 'is'. 'He sing singing' is incorrect; it should be 'he sings'. Also, 'listening' should be 'listens' to agree with the subject 'he'.