Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện được cảm xúc cá nhân, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it give me' nên là 'it gives me'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing a lot. I usually sing when I'm taking a shower or cooking. Singing gives me a relaxing time and makes me feel happy and more appreciative of life.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'It was pro professional training is reason why I just only sing by natural and simple way' không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I learned how to sing when I was a student at school. It was professional training, but I usually sing in a natural and simple way. Nevertheless, I enjoy singing a lot because it helps me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã thể hiện ý tưởng rõ ràng và cảm xúc tốt, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi nhỏ về đại từ và thì. Ví dụ, 'I wish I can sing' nên là 'I wish I could sing' và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy chú ý sử dụng đại từ đúng và câu trôi chảy hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my husband. I wish I could sing a love song for him at our wedding. It would be a romantic way to express everything in my heart and mind.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Ví dụ, 'boost off energy' nên là 'boost energy' và 'energy melody' nên là 'energetic melody'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trôi chảy hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because songs with positive lyrics and energetic melodies can boost energy and help reduce stress.

× I usually sing when it I'm taking shower or cooking food.

✓ I usually sing when I'm taking a shower or cooking food.

The phrase 'it I'm taking shower' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I'm taking a shower'. The article 'a' is necessary before 'shower' because it is a countable noun here. Also, 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I enjoy singing because it give me a quality relaxed time and I always feel happy, comfortable and feel love life more.

✓ I enjoy singing because it gives me quality relaxed time and I always feel happy, comfortable, and love life more.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'feel love life more' is awkward; 'love life more' is better without 'feel'. Added commas for clarity.

× It was pro professional training is reason why I just only sing by natural and simple way.

✓ It was professional training; that's why I only sing in a natural and simple way.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Pro professional' is a typo and should be 'professional'. The sentence needs to be split and restructured for clarity. 'Sing by natural and simple way' should be 'sing in a natural and simple way'.

× But I still enjoy singing a lot because it bring me uh comfortable and relaxed time.

✓ But I still enjoy singing a lot because it brings me comfortable and relaxed time.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity.

× I wish I can sing for my husband when our marriage event, I wanted to sing for her, for him, a love song and show him everything in my mind, everything in my heart.

✓ I wish I could sing for my husband at our wedding event. I want to sing a love song for him and show him everything in my mind, everything in my heart.

'I wish I can' is incorrect; 'I wish I could' expresses a desire for something that may not be possible. 'Marriage event' is better expressed as 'wedding event'. 'I wanted' should be 'I want' to maintain present tense. 'For her, for him' is confusing; 'for him' is correct here.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because the song uh with positive lyric and energy melody can boost off energy and help people reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because songs with positive lyrics and energetic melodies can boost energy and help people reduce stress.

'The song uh with positive lyric and energy melody' is incorrect. It should be plural 'songs' with 'positive lyrics' and 'energetic melodies'. 'Boost off energy' is incorrect; it should be 'boost energy'. The filler 'uh' should be removed.