Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在发音错误和语法错误，例如将'singing'说成'saying'，且句子结构不够清晰。建议回答时直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并用简洁明了的句子描述具体喜欢的歌曲或类型，避免冗余和重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, I enjoy singing lively English songs like those by Justin Bieber, which always make me feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如'had never learned seeing'应为'have never learned singing professionally'。建议回答时注意时态和语法，避免重复，并且用连贯的句子表达自学唱歌的经历。

Ví dụ: I have never learned singing professionally, but I started teaching myself online when I was about 19 or 20 years old because I love singing.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并用连贯的句子表达愿望，避免模糊和重复。

Ví dụ: If I have the chance to sing on stage, I would like to perform for my loved ones and my fans because their support means a lot to me.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现发音错误和重复，如'seeing'应为'singing'。建议回答时注意发音准确，句子简洁，并用具体例子说明唱歌如何带来快乐和鼓励。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and comfort to people. For instance, songs can uplift those who feel sad or stressed by providing encouragement and hope.

× Of course, I like saying, do you know the song that Justin sang in a stranger thing called a A Turn Around is very funny for me.

✓ Of course, I like singing. Do you know the song that Justin sang in Stranger Things called "A Turn Around"? It is very funny to me.

这里'saying'应改为'singing'，因为表达喜欢唱歌时应使用动词的-ing形式表示动作。

× do you know the song that Justin sang in a stranger thing called a A Turn Around is very funny for me.

✓ Do you know the song that Justin sang in Stranger Things called "A Turn Around"? It is very funny to me.

“a stranger thing”应为“Stranger Things”，这是专有名词，且剧名不需要冠词。

× And especially I like those, uh, English songs, uh, they're very vivid.

✓ And especially, I like those English songs; they are very vivid.

原句中'uh'为口语填充词，书面表达中应去除或用逗号分隔，使句子更通顺。

× Oh, I had never learned seeing a very professionally, but I studied it by myself when I was about 20.

✓ Oh, I had never learned singing very professionally, but I studied it by myself when I was about 20.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且表达过去未曾学过某事时，使用过去完成时'had never learned'是正确的。

× I always learn it by myself on online.

✓ I always learn it by myself online.

'on online'是不正确的搭配，正确用法是直接用'online'表示“在线”。

× I think I will sing to who I love and and my fans.

✓ I think I will sing to those I love and my fans.

'who'在这里应使用宾格形式'those'，因为是介词宾语。

× I I really hope I have singing stands, a singing fight.

✓ I really hope I have singing fans, a singing fight.

原句中'stands'和'fight'用法不当，推测意为“歌迷”，应改为'fans'。

× Of course I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表达唱歌能带来快乐。

× Not only happiness but also saying can encourage person who who who are sad or who are upset.

✓ Not only happiness, but also singing can encourage people who are sad or upset.

'saying'应为'singing'，'person'应为复数'people'，且去除多余的重复词。

× I think songs always have power to every person in this world.

✓ I think songs always have power over every person in this world.

'have power to'应改为'have power over'，表示“对……有影响力”。