Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、"emotional song"は単数形でなく複数形の"emotional songs"が適切です。また、"they makes me feel sadness and comfortable"は文法的に誤りで、"they make me feel sad and comfortable"のように修正すると自然です。さらに、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially emotional songs because they make me feel both sad and comforted. For example, listening to a heartfelt ballad can help me express my feelings and relax.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"learned how to think"はおそらく"learned how to sing"の誤りと思われます。より明確に、簡潔に答えることが重要です。例えば、歌の正式なレッスンを受けたかどうかをはっきり述べ、理由を添えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons because I prefer to sing freely without following strict rules. I enjoy expressing myself in my own way.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、時制の一致や前置詞の使い方に注意が必要です。例えば、"when I was struggling"は過去形で正しいですが、"thanks for them"は不自然で、"thank them"が適切です。より自然な表現に改善しましょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my friends because they have been very supportive when I was going through difficult times. Singing for them is my way of saying thank you.

Gợi ý: 回答は肯定的ですが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。"singing has umm soul, which is very kinds of feelings"は不自然で、"singing has soul and conveys various emotions"のように言い換えると良いでしょう。また、最後の文も簡潔に整理しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness to many people because it has soul and conveys a wide range of emotions. When I sing to someone I care about, it can make them feel joyful.

× Actually I really like singing, especially emotional song because they makes me feel sadness and comfortable.

✓ Actually I really like singing, especially emotional songs because they make me feel sad and comfortable.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match 'they', which is plural. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'songs'. 'Sadness' is a noun, but here the adjective 'sad' is appropriate to describe feelings.

× I actually, I haven't really learned how to think to be honest.

✓ I actually haven't really learned how to sing to be honest.

The verb 'think' is incorrect in context; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'haven't really learned' is correct past tense usage here.

× I really learn singing, but I wanna sing whatever I want, so I don't wanna be fit the shape of how to think.

✓ I really learn singing, but I want to sing whatever I want, so I don't want to fit the shape of how to sing.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate. 'Be fit the shape' is incorrect; it should be 'fit the shape'. Also, 'how to think' should be 'how to sing' to match context.

× Actually I want to sing for my friends because they are very supportive when I was struggling with something.

✓ Actually I want to sing for my friends because they were very supportive when I was struggling with something.

The supporting action happened in the past, so 'are' should be 'were' to match past tense 'was struggling'.

× So I want to say thanks for them.

✓ So I want to say thanks to them.

The correct preposition with 'say thanks' is 'to', not 'for'.

× I think singing brings happiness for so many people because singing has umm soul, which is very kinds of feelings.

✓ I think singing brings happiness to so many people because singing has, um, soul, which is a very kind of feeling.

The correct preposition is 'to' after 'brings happiness'. 'Kinds of feelings' should be 'a very kind of feeling' to be grammatically correct.

× So by singing to someone who I like does the people, the person would be happy.

✓ So by singing to someone I like, that person would be happy.

The phrase 'does the people' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Someone who I like' can be simplified to 'someone I like'. 'The person' is better than 'the people' here because it refers to one individual.