Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like singing. Umm, singing makes me relaxed and I often singing when I'm driving or taking shower.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No I haven't, I just follow the music app to following the singer songs.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Well, I always seem for myself and it's really relax. Or maybe in the future I will sing for my husband.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do think seeing can bring happiness to people, especially decline their stress.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多,如"I often singing"应为"I often sing",且"taking shower"应为"taking a shower"。建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用。此外,回答中有重复词汇"singing",可以用同义词替换,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I often sing while driving or taking a shower, which makes these activities more enjoyable.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整且有语法错误,如"to following"应为"to follow","singer songs"应为"singers' songs"。建议学习正确的动词形式和所有格的用法,并使句子更通顺。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons. I usually learn by following songs on music apps and trying to imitate the singers.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,"I always seem for myself"可能想表达"I usually sing for myself"。"it's really relax"应为"it's really relaxing"。建议注意词汇的正确使用和句子表达的准确性。
Ví dụ: Well, I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax. However, in the future, I hope to sing for my husband as well.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误,如"seeing"应为"singing","especially decline their stress"表达不准确,建议改为"especially by reducing their stress"。同时,回答较简短,建议增加具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially by reducing their stress and improving their mood.
× I often singing when I'm driving or taking shower.
✓ I often sing when I'm driving or taking a shower.
这里的动词应该用原形动词'sing',因为前面有助动词'often'表示习惯动作,不能用动名词形式。'taking shower'缺少冠词,应该是'taking a shower'。
× No I haven't, I just follow the music app to following the singer songs.
✓ No, I haven't. I just follow the music app to follow the singer's songs.
句中'following'用法错误,应该用动词原形'follow',因为前面有'to'不定式。'singer songs'缺少所有格,应为'singer's songs'。
× Well, I always seem for myself and it's really relax.
✓ Well, I always sing for myself and it's really relaxing.
'seem for'用法错误,应该是'sing for'。'relax'应为形容词形式'relaxing',表示令人放松的感觉。
× Yes, I do think seeing can bring happiness to people, especially decline their stress.
✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people, especially to decline their stress.
'seeing'应为'singing',符合上下文。'especially decline their stress'缺少介词'to',应为'especially to decline their stress'。