SingingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Honestly speaking, I I do not like singing at all. Uh, I think my singing abilities are not uh, good enough. So I feel very comfortable in uh, when someone force me to sing in front of others. I can only sing when I'm alone to express my emotions.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

When I was in school, uh, at that time, my music teacher, uh, taught us basic singing skills. But after that, uh, I never, uh, got a chance to learn, uh, singing.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

If I ever get a chance to sing, to sing for someone, definitely I would like to sing for my daughter. She plays guitar very beautifully, so I want to sing along with her.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it provides them a gateway to release their stress and it also uh, like uh, unwind after a long day. Most of the people uh, love singing because.

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Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words such as 'I I'. Also, structure your answer clearly by starting with a direct response, then giving reasons. For example, say 'I do not like singing because I feel my abilities are not good enough, and I prefer singing alone to express my emotions.' This will make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I do not like singing because I feel my abilities are not good enough. Therefore, I only sing when I am alone to express my emotions, as I feel uncomfortable singing in front of others.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Reduce the use of filler words like 'uh' and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add details using linking words. For example, 'Yes, I learnt basic singing skills from my music teacher in school, but I have not had the chance to learn more since then.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I learnt basic singing skills from my music teacher when I was in school. However, I have not had the opportunity to continue learning singing after that.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural by avoiding repetition like 'to sing, to sing'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'If I ever get a chance to sing for someone, I would definitely choose my daughter because she plays the guitar beautifully, and I want to sing along with her.'

Ví dụ: If I ever get a chance to sing for someone, I would definitely choose my daughter because she plays the guitar beautifully, and I want to sing along with her.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Make your answer complete and coherent by using linking words and specific reasons. For example, 'Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people release stress and unwind after a long day. Many people enjoy singing for these reasons.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people release stress and unwind after a long day. Many people enjoy singing for these reasons.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I feel very comfortable in uh, when someone force me to sing in front of others.

I feel very uncomfortable when someone forces me to sing in front of others.

The verb 'force' should be in the third person singular form 'forces' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. Also, the phrase 'feel very comfortable' contradicts the context, so it is corrected to 'feel very uncomfortable' for clarity.

Past tense issue

× I never, uh, got a chance to learn, uh, singing.

I never got a chance to learn singing.

The sentence is correct in past tense; however, the commas and fillers 'uh' are unnecessary and can be removed for clarity and fluency.

Verb + -ing form

× I never, uh, got a chance to learn, uh, singing.

I never got a chance to learn to sing.

The verb 'learn' is typically followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing'. Using 'to sing' is grammatically correct here.

Verb + -ing form

× I want to sing along with her.

I want to sing along with her.

This sentence is correct; 'sing along' is a correct verb phrase and no correction is needed.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It provides them a gateway to release their stress and it also uh, like uh, unwind after a long day.

It provides them with a gateway to release their stress and also to unwind after a long day.

The verb 'provide' requires the preposition 'with' after the object. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and 'to unwind' is the correct infinitive form to parallel 'to release'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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