Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で、質問に直接答えていません。"thinking"と"singing"が混同されているようです。質問に対して明確に"Yes, I like singing because..."と答え、具体的な理由や例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, I often sing my favorite songs when I commute to work.

Gợi ý: 回答が混乱しており、質問に対して明確な答えがありません。"No, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I took music classes in elementary and junior high school."のように、直接的で簡潔な答えを心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I took music classes when I was in elementary and junior high school.

Gợi ý: 質問の意図を理解していないようです。"Who do you want to sing for?"は"誰のために歌いたいか"を尋ねています。質問に直接答え、理由や具体例を付け加えましょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由や具体例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their feelings through meaningful lyrics.

× Yes, I love thinking umm thinking makes me feel happy and relaxing.

✓ Yes, I love singing. Singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.

The student used 'thinking' instead of 'singing', which is the correct verb related to the question. Also, 'relaxing' should be 'relaxed' to describe the feeling, not the action.

× when I go to working, I often already sing my favorite singer.

✓ When I go to work, I often already sing my favorite songs.

The phrase 'go to working' is incorrect; it should be 'go to work'. Also, 'sing my favorite singer' is incorrect; it should be 'sing my favorite songs' or 'sing songs by my favorite singer'.

× Nor I have nobody learned how to think.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

The sentence is confusing and uses incorrect pronouns and verbs. 'Nor I have nobody' is incorrect; it should be 'No, I have never'. Also, 'learned how to think' should be 'learned how to sing' to match the context.

× I took a class on music, uh, when I was, uh, elementary school and junior high school, but umm.

✓ I took a music class when I was in elementary school and junior high school.

The phrase 'on music' is less natural than 'a music class'. Also, 'when I was elementary school' lacks the preposition 'in' before the school levels.

× For me a music is 1 umm, singing is one of the way to relax so or, or umm or stop uh sorry or uh, sorry.

✓ For me, music is one of the ways to relax or to stop, uh, sorry.

The article 'a' before 'music' is incorrect because 'music' is uncountable. Also, 'one of the way' should be 'one of the ways' to agree in number.

× I think for myself to uh be released from streams.

✓ I think for myself, it helps me to be released from stress.

The phrase 'be released from streams' is incorrect; likely intended 'stress'. Also, 'for myself' is awkward here; adding 'it helps me' clarifies the meaning.

× It's one of the way to P for people to relax and feel happy

✓ It's one of the ways for people to relax and feel happy.

'One of the way' should be 'one of the ways' to match plural form. Also, 'to P' is unclear and likely a mistake; replaced with 'for'.

× most of the songs umm her brothers make her umm, let's make our rhythm and meaning her and good uh words so.

✓ Most of the songs, her brothers make them. Let's make our rhythm and meaningful and good words.

The sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns like 'her' instead of 'them'. Also, 'meaning her' is incorrect; should be 'meaningful'.