Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like singing because it can help me to reduce and relieve my stress and all. Are I always singing by myself as a as a form of entertainment which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't taken lessons about singing properly with skills and techniques because I consider myself as an amateur and do not tend to be a professional singer.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I prefer to sing for myself because singing is just a way of entertainment and do not I do not want to involve any pressure in it. Singing in front of others or singing for somebody would make me feel nervous and awkward.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music are of great motivation. It can uplift and change people's emotions and help people feeling more joyful and relaxed.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“Are I always singing”不符合英语语法,且句子结构重复冗长。建议简化句子结构,避免多余词汇,使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress. I usually sing alone for entertainment, which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons because I see myself as an amateur and don't plan to become a professional singer.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“do not I do not”,且句子结构重复。建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用连接词提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to sing for myself because it's a form of entertainment without pressure. Singing in front of others makes me feel nervous and awkward.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在语法错误,如“music are”应为“music is”,以及“help people feeling”应为“help people feel”。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music is very motivating. It can uplift emotions and help people feel more joyful and relaxed.
× Are I always singing by myself as a as a form of entertainment which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.
✓ I am always singing by myself as a form of entertainment which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.
句子中主语是第一人称单数“I”,谓语动词应使用“am”而不是“are”,这是主谓一致错误。建议记住主语和动词的正确搭配,特别是be动词的变化。
× I like singing because it can help me to reduce and relieve my stress and all.
✓ I like singing because it can help me reduce and relieve my stress.
句子中“and all”用法不正式且多余,属于连词使用不当。建议避免使用口语化且模糊的表达,保持句子简洁明确。
× I consider myself as an amateur and do not tend to be a professional singer.
✓ I consider myself an amateur and do not tend to be a professional singer.
“consider”后面不需要介词“as”,这是代词使用错误。建议学习固定搭配,避免多余介词。
× and do not I do not want to involve any pressure in it.
✓ and I do not want to involve any pressure in it.
句子中“do not I”语序错误,应为“I do not”,属于句子结构错误。建议注意英语陈述句的正确语序。
× music are of great motivation.
✓ music is of great motivation.
music是不可数名词,谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”,这是主谓一致错误。建议注意不可数名词的动词搭配。
× help people feeling more joyful and relaxed.
✓ help people feel more joyful and relaxed.
动词“help”后应接动词原形“feel”,而非动名词“feeling”,这是动词形式使用错误。建议熟悉动词搭配规则,特别是“help”后接动词原形。