Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。"on my screen" 可能是误说，应改为 "when I sing"。建议回答时直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并且保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。"learn the skills about seeing my friend" 可能是想说 "learning singing skills with my friend"。建议使用正确的时态和表达，句子要简洁明了。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in junior high school. I practiced singing with my friends every day.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但有些表达不够地道。"sing with myself" 应改为 "sing by myself" 或 "sing alone"。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意句子连贯。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I like to sing for myself because it makes me feel comfortable. Singing alone helps me express my emotions and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: 回答中有严重语法和用词错误，"make people feel unsuccessful" 应为 "make people feel successful" 或 "happy"。建议回答时注意用词准确，表达清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and joyful.

× I like singing because on my screen I feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ I like singing because when I sing I feel very happy and relaxed.

The phrase 'on my screen' is incorrect in this context. It seems the student intended to say 'when I sing'. The verb tense is correct, but the phrase is wrong. Replace 'on my screen' with 'when I sing' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Yes, when I was in junior high school I usually learn the skills about seeing my friend and we practice together all the day.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior high school I usually learned the skills about singing with my friend and we practiced together all day.

The verbs 'learn' and 'practice' should be in the past tense 'learned' and 'practiced' because the action happened in the past. Also, 'seeing my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'singing with my friend'. 'All the day' should be 'all day' for correct expression.

× We were really like.

✓ We really liked it.

The sentence 'We were really like' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'We really liked it' to convey that they enjoyed the activity. The verb 'like' needs to be in past tense 'liked' and the sentence needs an object 'it'.

× And to be honest, I want to sing for myself because when I sing with myself, I feel very comfortable and I can express my emotion and reduce my stress.

✓ And to be honest, I want to sing for myself because when I sing alone, I feel very comfortable and I can express my emotions and reduce my stress.

The phrase 'sing with myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'sing alone'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do. I've been thinking to pick up because singing is a way that can make people feel unsuccessful and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do. I've been thinking of picking it up because singing is a way that can make people feel successful and relaxed.

The phrase 'thinking to pick up' is incorrect; it should be 'thinking of picking it up'. Also, 'unsuccessful' is the opposite of the intended meaning; it should be 'successful'. This correction fixes verb form and word choice errors.