Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like seeing because I think seeing was no good. Many people look looking and listen, you're seeing. So I don't like seeing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I don't learn how to sing because I don't like singing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
No, I don't wanted to sing for.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
I don't know because I don't like saying I'm very shy and uh, I think singing was not become happy to people.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法错误和词汇使用错误,且表达不清晰。建议学习正确的动词形式和句子结构,避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it and I feel shy when I sing in front of others.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短,语法时态使用不准确。建议使用正确的时态表达过去经历,并适当扩展内容,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I don't enjoy singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,且表达不完整。建议学习正确的动词形式和句子结构,直接回答问题并适当解释原因。
Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and uncomfortable singing in front of others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,语法错误多,且逻辑不清。建议理清思路,使用正确的语法表达自己的观点,并用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I think singing can bring happiness to people, but I personally don't enjoy it because I am very shy.
× No, I don't like seeing because I think seeing was no good.
✓ No, I don't like singing because I think singing is not good.
这里'seeing'应为'singing',且时态应为一般现在时,表示习惯或事实。动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢或不喜欢某个动作。
× Many people look looking and listen, you're seeing.
✓ Many people look and listen, you're singing.
'look looking'重复且错误,应为'look';'you're seeing'应为'you're singing',保持语义一致。
× So I don't like seeing.
✓ So I don't like singing.
同上,'seeing'应为'singing',保持语义一致。
× No, I don't learn how to sing because I don't like singing.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't like singing.
这里应使用现在完成时'haven't learned'表示到目前为止没有学过,'don't learn'不符合语境。
× No, I don't wanted to sing for.
✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone.
'don't wanted'时态混用,应为'don't want',且句子不完整,补充宾语使句子完整。
× I don't know because I don't like saying I'm very shy and uh, I think singing was not become happy to people.
✓ I don't know because I don't like singing, I'm very shy and, uh, I think singing does not make people happy.
'don't like saying'应为'don't like singing';'singing was not become happy to people'语法错误,改为'singing does not make people happy'更通顺。