Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and shows enthusiasm, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to keep your response within 4-5 sentences and focus on directly answering the question with clear supporting details. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'the parts that come along with it' and instead specify what you enjoy about music.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm not a professional singer, I often sing in the shower for fun. I also appreciate music deeply, especially the melodies and rhythms that make songs enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about your self-learning process and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I enjoy rapping and have taught myself by listening carefully to my favourite rappers. This self-practice has helped me improve my rhythm and flow over time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide supporting details with linking words. Avoid vague statements like 'I would want' without completing the thought. Also, keep your answer concise and focused.

Ví dụ: I don't usually prefer to sing for others, but I enjoy rapping in front of an audience. I love seeing how people react to performances because it shows that the artist's message is connecting with them. Additionally, as a dancer, I appreciate performing arts in general.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows personal experience, which is good, but some parts are unclear or awkward, such as 'all years are on her' and 'people get too happy to see'. Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not support your main point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For example, when my friend performs on stage, the audience is fully focused and enjoys the music without distractions. This shows how singing can create a joyful and engaging atmosphere.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing ever.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

The phrase 'haven't learned how to sing ever' is awkward and unidiomatic. The correct placement is 'have never learned' to express that at no time in the past have you learned to sing. This is a common usage in English to indicate something that has not happened at any time up to now.

× I would absolutely dig to rap and I love to see the reactions when people see an artist perform.

✓ I would absolutely dig rapping and I love to see the reactions when people see an artist perform.

The verb 'dig' (meaning 'like') is followed by a gerund (-ing form) without 'to'. Therefore, 'dig to rap' is incorrect; it should be 'dig rapping'. This is a common pattern in English where certain verbs are followed by gerunds rather than infinitives.

× I've also been a dancer, so I would want.

✓ I've also been a dancer, so I would want to perform.

The sentence 'I would want.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. To make it complete and meaningful, it should specify what the speaker would want, such as 'to perform'. This correction completes the sentence structure.

× My friend the Banshee, who is a great singer, when she performs on stage, all years are on her.

✓ My friend the Banshee, who is a great singer, when she performs on stage, all eyes are on her.

The word 'years' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'eyes' to indicate that everyone is watching her. This is a common homophone error where similar sounding words are confused.

× Nobody gets disturbed by their phone and people get too happy to see.

✓ Nobody gets disturbed by their phone and people get very happy to see her perform.

The phrase 'people get too happy to see' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify what people are happy to see, such as 'her perform'. Also, 'too happy' implies an excessive degree, which may not be intended; 'very happy' is more appropriate here.