Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免口语化的填充词，并且直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel I lack the natural talent to sing well.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误明显，句子结构混乱。建议使用清晰的句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not very interested in it. I have tried a few times, but I found it quite challenging to perform well.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at it. However, if I had to choose, I would sing for my wife to show my appreciation for everything she has done for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的词汇，避免拼写错误，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone sings, they usually feel relaxed and enjoy themselves. Moreover, singing can create a strong sense of connection and joy among people.

× Well, I not really into singing because, you know, I don't have this natural talent, so it's hard for me to sing a song well.

✓ Well, I'm not really into singing because, you know, I don't have this natural talent, so it's hard for me to sing a song well.

句子中缺少助动词“am”，导致现在时态表达不完整。正确表达应为“I am not really into singing”，表示现在的状态。

× No, I haven't. Then had to say because I'm not very interested in it and I tried several times before and I found it's really challenging for me to perform well.

✓ No, I haven't. Then I have to say that I'm not very interested in it, and I have tried several times before and found it's really challenging for me to perform well.

句子缺少主语“I”，导致结构不完整；时态应保持一致，使用现在完成时“have tried”；连接词“that”帮助引导宾语从句，使句子更通顺。

× Well actually I don't want to sing for anyone because as I mentioned before I'm not good at singing but if I had to choose it, I would like to sing for my wife because I just wanted to send for all she has done for me.

✓ Well, actually I don't want to sing for anyone because, as I mentioned before, I'm not good at singing, but if I had to choose, I would like to sing for my wife because I just want to say thanks for all she has done for me.

“choose it”中“it”多余，应去掉；“send”用错，应为“say thanks”表达感谢；时态保持一致，使用现在时“want”和“say”。

× Yes, I believe singing can happen happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

“happen happiness”搭配错误，正确表达应为“bring happiness”，表示带来幸福。

× For example, when someone sing a song, they usually feel relaxed and enjoy themselves more.

✓ For example, when someone sings a song, they usually feel relaxed and enjoy themselves more.

主语“someone”是单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“sings”，保持主谓一致。

× Moreover, sanitizer can have a strong sense of connection and joy.

✓ Moreover, singers can have a strong sense of connection and joy.

“sanitizer”与语境不符，应为“singers”（歌手），表达更准确。