Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中多次出现了“seeing”而非“singing”，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，避免重复和语法错误。回答应更简洁自然，避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I am good at it, and it gives me confidence. I also enjoy singing along to my favorite songs as it helps me relieve stress.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，且“seeing”应为“singing”。建议练习完整句子表达，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned some singing skills in my primary school music class, but I believe that natural talent is more important than training.

Gợi ý: 回答较长且有语法错误，如“give”应为“gives”，“feedbacks”应为“feedback”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和词汇使用。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my boyfriend because he loves my voice and always gives me positive feedback. Singing together makes us both very happy.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但“Sing”应为“Singing”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更流畅的句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it conveys the singer's emotions and spreads joy to the listeners.

× Yes, I like seeing because I'm really good at seeing and and it gives me a lot of confidence and I really enjoying to sing along That's really release my stress.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I'm really good at singing and it gives me a lot of confidence and I really enjoy singing along. That really releases my stress.

动词后面接动名词形式时，应该用动词的-ing形式作为名词使用。原句中seeing应为singing，enjoy后应接动名词形式singing，而不是to sing。release应使用第三人称单数形式releases，因为主语是That。

× Yes, I have learned a little bit things skills on my music class in my primary school, but I think.

✓ Yes, I have learned a few skills in my music class in primary school, but I think.

learned是过去分词，使用正确。这里主要是量词和表达问题，a little bit things skills不合适，应改为a few skills。介词on改为in更合适。

× Yes, I have learned a little bit things skills on my music class in my primary school, but I think.

✓ Yes, I have learned a few skills in my music class in primary school, but I think.

things和skills重复且不合适，应该用a few skills表示一些技能。

× Yes, I have learned a little bit things skills on my music class in my primary school, but I think.

✓ Yes, I have learned a few skills in my music class in primary school, but I think talent plays a more important role than practice.

句子结构不完整，but后面缺少完整内容，需补充完整句子。

× The talent of seeing plays a more important role than the.

✓ The talent of singing plays a more important role than practice.

seeing应为singing，the后面缺少名词，补充practice使句子完整。

× he loves my voice and always give me really positive feedbacks which makes me really confident after seeing to him and we are enjoying singing together happily.

✓ he loves my voice and always gives me really positive feedback which makes me really confident after singing to him and we enjoy singing together happily.

主语he是第三人称单数，谓语动词give应改为gives。feedback是不可数名词，不用复数形式。enjoying改为一般现在时enjoy。seeing应为singing。

× he loves my voice and always give me really positive feedbacks which makes me really confident after seeing to him and we are enjoying singing together happily.

✓ he loves my voice and always gives me really positive feedback which makes me really confident after singing to him and we enjoy singing together happily.

enjoy后应接动名词singing。seeing应为singing。

× he loves my voice and always give me really positive feedbacks which makes me really confident after seeing to him and we are enjoying singing together happily.

✓ he loves my voice and always gives me really positive feedback which makes me really confident after singing to him and we enjoy singing together happily.

feedback是不可数名词，不应使用复数形式feedbacks。

× Sing can surely bring happiness to people because seeing can carry the emotion from the singer and deliver happiness to listeners.

✓ Singing can surely bring happiness to people because singing can carry the emotion from the singer and deliver happiness to listeners.

Sing作为动词原形不适合此处，应使用动名词形式singing。seeing应为singing。