Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'help me feel relax' nên là 'helps me feel relaxed'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể về việc hát giúp bạn thư giãn như thế nào.

Ví dụ: I like singing folk songs in my free time because it helps me feel relaxed and relieves stress after walking for a long time. Moreover, I am proud of preserving traditional values through singing.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng trong câu, ví dụ 'when I was 8 years old' nên đi với thì quá khứ đơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng bằng cách giải thích thêm về cách học hát và cảm nhận của bạn khi học.

Ví dụ: I learned how to sing folk songs when I was 8 years old. My mother taught me the basics, and I also watched music programs on television to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích lý do. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói bạn muốn hát cho ai đó hoặc không muốn hát cho ai. Ngoài ra, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to sing alone because I feel shy and lack confidence when singing in front of others. Therefore, I feel more relaxed and comfortable when I sing by myself.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên sử dụng các từ nối tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'never think about some problems' nên là 'don't think about their problems'. Bạn cũng có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when they sing, they don't think about their problems. Moreover, it helps reduce stress and makes them feel relaxed after a long day at work.

× I like singing folk song in my free time because it help me feel relax and really stress after walking long hour.

✓ I like singing folk songs in my free time because they help me feel relaxed and less stressed after walking for a long hour.

The noun 'folk song' should be plural 'folk songs' because it refers to songs in general, not just one. The verb 'help' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'folk songs'. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' to correctly use the adjective form. 'Really stress' is incorrect; it should be 'less stressed' to express reduced stress. 'Walking long hour' should be 'walking for a long hour' to use the correct preposition and article.

× I like singing folk song in my free time because it help me feel relax and really stress after walking long hour.

✓ I like singing folk songs in my free time because they help me feel relaxed and less stressed after walking for a long hour.

The modal verb 'help' is correctly used here but needs to agree with the plural subject 'folk songs'. The sentence also requires proper verb forms and prepositions for clarity.

× Beside I'm proud of traditional value.

✓ Besides, I'm proud of traditional values.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' as an adverb meaning 'in addition'. 'Traditional value' should be plural 'traditional values' to refer to multiple cultural aspects.

× I have learned how to sing folk song when I was 8 years old.

✓ I learned how to sing folk songs when I was 8 years old.

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is not appropriate with a specific past time 'when I was 8 years old'. Simple past 'learned' is correct. Also, 'folk song' should be plural 'folk songs'.

× My mother taught me how to sing well.

✓ My mother taught me how to sing well.

This sentence is correct; no plural or singular issues.

× Besides, I watch music program on the television.

✓ Besides, I watch music programs on the television.

'Music program' should be plural 'music programs' to indicate multiple shows. The present tense 'watch' is appropriate here.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is correct; no modal verb issues.

× I usually prefer to sing along because I feel shy and lack of confidence when I sing in front of others.

✓ I usually prefer singing along because I feel shy and lack confidence when I sing in front of others.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'singing' is more natural than the infinitive 'to sing'. 'Lack of confidence' should be 'lack confidence' without 'of'.

× I usually prefer to sing along because I feel shy and lack of confidence when I sing in front of others.

✓ I usually prefer singing along because I feel shy and lack confidence when I sing in front of others.

The phrase 'lack of confidence' is incorrect here; it should be 'lack confidence' without the preposition 'of'.

× Besides, I feel more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Besides, I feel more relaxed and comfortable.

This sentence is correct; no pronoun issues.

× Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when singing people never think about some problems.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when singing, people never think about any problems.

The phrase 'some problems' is less appropriate here; 'any problems' fits better in negative or general statements. Also, a comma after 'when singing' improves clarity.

× Besides, it helps people reduce stress and feel relaxed after a long day.

✓ Besides, it helps people reduce stress and feel relaxed after a long day.

This sentence is correct; no preposition issues.