Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I don't consider myself a good singer, but I really enjoy listening to songs from various genres. Music helps me relax and focus better when I work, which is why I like singing along sometimes.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use correct verb tenses and structure your answer clearly with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I have never had the chance to take singing lessons. I believe it's beneficial to learn singing basics during childhood. A friend once suggested it to me, and I would like to learn if I get the opportunity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your response coherent.

Ví dụ: I want to sing mainly for myself because it brings me joy and confidence. However, I also hope that others can enjoy my singing when I perform on stage or listen to my recordings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding vague phrases. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and boosts their confidence. Additionally, talented singers often gain recognition and connect more easily with others through their music.

× I'm actually not good at singing but I really enjoy the song related to any genre and I really enjoy listening to song that uh, helps me comes my mind and concentrate back on work and that's why I really likes a lot of songs and singing.

✓ I'm actually not good at singing but I really enjoy songs related to any genre and I really enjoy listening to songs that, uh, help me clear my mind and concentrate back on work and that's why I really like a lot of songs and singing.

The sentence has several issues: 'the song related to any genre' should be plural 'songs related to any genre' to match the context (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'listening to song' should be 'listening to songs' (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'helps me comes my mind' is incorrect; 'helps me come to my mind' or better 'help me clear my mind' is correct; 'helps' should be 'help' because the subject is plural 'songs' (Grammar Problem Type 27). 'I really likes' should be 'I really like' because the subject 'I' requires the base form without 's' (Grammar Problem Type 2). The corrections improve subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× No, I actually didn't had any opportunity to learn the singing lesson, but it's really helpful for a person to get the learning basics from the childhood.

✓ No, I actually didn't have any opportunity to learn singing lessons, but it's really helpful for a person to learn the basics from childhood.

After 'didn't', the verb should be in base form, so 'didn't had' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't have' (Grammar Problem Type 5). Also, 'the singing lesson' is better as 'singing lessons' to generalize the concept (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'get the learning basics from the childhood' is awkward; 'learn the basics from childhood' is clearer and more natural.

× I had this idea from one of my friend but I didn't get the opportunity.

✓ I had this idea from one of my friends but I didn't get the opportunity.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun (Grammar Problem Type 1). This is a pluralization issue affecting pronoun reference.

× But I think if I get that I should.

✓ But I think if I get that opportunity, I should take it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I should' needs an object or verb to complete the thought. Adding 'take it' clarifies the intended meaning. Also, 'if I get that' is vague; specifying 'that opportunity' improves clarity. This relates to modal verb usage and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Types 4 and 26).

× I actually want to sing for myself.

✓ I actually want to sing for myself.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context. No correction needed.

× I am singing while listening, while listening to a song or in a performance or any stage.

✓ I sing while listening to a song or during a performance on any stage.

'I am singing while listening' is awkward and repetitive. Using simple present 'I sing' is better for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also, 'in a performance or any stage' should be 'during a performance on any stage' for correct preposition use (Grammar Problem Type 11).

× People can enjoy my singing by listening one, but I also want to.

✓ People can enjoy my singing by listening to it, and I also want to.

'Listening one' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to it' to refer to the singing (Grammar Problem Type 12). Also, 'but I also want to' is incomplete; 'and I also want to' is more appropriate here to continue the thought.

× Yes, singing brings happiness to people.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× It helps them calm their mind and get them more confident around others.

✓ It helps them calm their minds and become more confident around others.

'Calm their mind' should be 'calm their minds' because 'them' is plural (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Get them more confident' is incorrect; it should be 'become more confident' to properly express the idea.

× It gives them extra benefits to get famous and get well known by everyone around them.

✓ It gives them extra benefits, such as becoming famous and well known by everyone around them.

The phrase 'to get famous and get well known' is awkward; 'becoming famous and well known' is more natural. Also, adding 'such as' clarifies the benefits. This improves sentence structure and pronoun use.

× People, uh, usually try to get connected with them more easily than others.

✓ People usually try to connect with them more easily than with others.

'Try to get connected with them' is awkward; 'try to connect with them' is better. Also, 'more easily than others' is ambiguous; adding 'with others' clarifies the comparison (Grammar Problem Type 19).