Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt and covers the main points, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, watch out for small mistakes like 'another people' instead of 'other people' and unnecessary filler words like 'So and'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to express my emotions and connect with others. It can evoke feelings of happiness or sadness and create lasting memories. Additionally, I've been told I have a good voice, which motivates me to keep singing.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some vocabulary and grammar issues. For example, 'Carsis' seems to be a typo or unclear word. Also, use past tense consistently ('I started feeling tired'). Try to provide clearer details and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before. However, I didn't practice regularly, which made it difficult to improve. As a result, I started feeling tired and lost motivation, so I eventually stopped taking lessons.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Avoid abrupt endings and ensure your sentences are complete. Also, use linking words properly and check for grammar mistakes like 'other' instead of 'others' and 'progress my' which is incomplete. Try to be more specific and finish your thoughts.

Ví dụ: I enjoy singing for my friends and family because it helps me create happy memories and share my feelings with others. For example, last month I listened to old songs that reminded me of difficult times, and singing those songs helped me process my emotions.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and includes a good example, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For instance, 'a special moments' should be 'special moments', and 'you can instantly remind you' should be 'it can instantly remind you'. Try to use smoother sentence structures and correct grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music often connects us to special moments in our lives. For example, when you hear a song you listened to during a happy time, it can instantly remind you of those feelings and bring back joyful memories even years later.

× I love singing, I love expressing emotion through my songs and it allows me to connect with another people and make them to feel sadness or happiness and create memories.

✓ I love singing, I love expressing emotion through my songs and it allows me to connect with other people and make them feel sadness or happiness and create memories.

The phrase 'another people' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular countable nouns, while 'people' is plural. The correct phrase is 'other people'. Also, 'make them to feel' is incorrect; the verb 'make' is followed by the base form without 'to', so it should be 'make them feel'.

× Over time I start feeling tired and lost motivation so I eventually stopped.

✓ Over time I started feeling tired and lost motivation so I eventually stopped.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past events, 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to maintain consistency.

× For example, last month I was listening to old songs that reminded me of difficult times that I have and singing those songs helped me progress my.

✓ For example, last month I was listening to old songs that reminded me of difficult times that I had and singing those songs helped me progress.

The phrase 'times that I have' should be in the past tense 'times that I had' to match the past context. Also, 'helped me progress my' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'helped me progress' or 'helped me improve' without 'my'.

× Singing can bring happiness because music often connects us to a special moments in our lives.

✓ Singing can bring happiness because music often connects us to special moments in our lives.

The phrase 'a special moments' is incorrect because 'moments' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'special moments' without an article.

× For example, when you you hear a song that you listen to during a happy time, you can instantly remind you of those feeling and bring back joyful memories even years later.

✓ For example, when you hear a song that you listened to during a happy time, it can instantly remind you of those feelings and bring back joyful memories even years later.

The sentence has repeated 'you you' which is a typo. Also, 'you can instantly remind you' is incorrect; the subject should be 'it' (the song) that reminds you. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. Additionally, 'listen' should be past tense 'listened' to match the past event.