Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with specific reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and unclear expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about my daily stress. Listening to music also lifts my mood and makes me feel happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to answer directly and clearly, using complete sentences and linking words to organize your ideas. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um'.

Ví dụ: I haven't learned how to sing professionally yet, but if I have the opportunity, I would like to take singing lessons to learn techniques and how to express emotions like professional singers.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your feelings but is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary pauses and repetitions.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family, especially my parents, because I enjoy making them happy. Singing allows me to express my love and strengthen our connection.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and reduce stress from work and daily life. Listening to or singing songs can create memorable and positive experiences.

× Yeah, I really enjoy listening or or singing a song and singing a song really amazed and relaxing me and with the high value of walk and disturbance, that's why listening or singing music is a really good thing to me and relaxing.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy listening to or singing a song, and singing a song really amazes and relaxes me. With the high value of work and disturbance, that's why listening to or singing music is really good and relaxing for me.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form with the preposition 'to' after 'listening'. Also, 'amazed' and 'relaxing' should be in present tense to agree with the subject 'singing a song', so 'amazes' and 'relaxes' are correct. 'Walk' is a typo and should be 'work'. The phrase 'listening or singing music' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listening'. These corrections improve verb form and preposition usage.

× I'm not at, but if I get some chance or uh, something a programmations, then I will definitely, uh, go first learning, uh, singing tips, their emotions, their, uh, positioning, how the singer is singing well.

✓ I'm not yet, but if I get some chance or a program, then I will definitely go first to learn singing tips, their emotions, their positioning, and how the singer sings well.

The modal verb phrase 'will definitely go first learning' is incorrect; it should be 'will definitely go first to learn' to express intention. Also, 'programmations' is incorrect; 'program' is appropriate. The phrase 'how the singer is singing well' should be simplified to 'how the singer sings well' for clarity and correctness.

× I really, I really love to sing, uh, to, for my, uh, family members, father and mother, uh, I really want to see her face and her face really happy and with my voice, music and love, connectivity is really important and that's why the, uh, singing is really.

✓ I really love to sing for my family members, my father and mother. I really want to see their faces happy, and with my voice, music, and love, connection is really important. That's why singing is really meaningful to me.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used when referring to 'family members, father and mother'; the correct pronoun is 'their' to refer to multiple people. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and pronoun agreement.

× Yes, definitely singing can really relax their mind professionalism with the umm work, diversification, pressurize and time consuming.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can really relax their mind from the professionalism, work, diversification, pressure, and time consumption.

The phrase 'relax their mind professionalism with the umm work' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Pressurize' is a verb but used incorrectly here; 'pressure' as a noun is appropriate. Also, 'time consuming' should be 'time consumption' to fit the noun list. The sentence is corrected for proper noun usage and clarity.

× Uh, if you if we get us some chance to listen or singing song, then it feel a good and memorable and it's significant for.

✓ If we get a chance to listen to or sing a song, then it feels good and memorable, and it's significant for us.

The sentence has multiple structural errors: 'if you if we get us some chance' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'if we get a chance'. 'Listen or singing song' should be 'listen to or sing a song'. 'It feel a good' should be 'it feels good'. The sentence is completed properly to convey the intended meaning.