Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like seeing uh, because it can cheers me up. For example, if I feel very upset, uh, there's no energy. I will choose a thing like that. I like, uh, and I will see it. I think it can uh, make me relax.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I, I go to the Sunday school, uh, my Sunday school teacher told us how to sing the Bible songs. So maybe I think it helps, it helps me to sing the other.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Uh, I want to sing for my mom because when I study English, she always helps me to take care of my daughter and she really do a lot of things for my family and so that I can have free time to do the things.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think, uh, seeing can definitely bring happiness to people. Uh, but I think it, it more depends on the type of thing and some words in The thing is not is negative, it's will be done.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音错误("seeing"应为"singing"),且表达不够连贯,句子重复且缺乏具体细节。建议加强发音练习,避免重复,使用连接词使表达更流畅,并提供更具体的例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it cheers me up. For instance, when I feel upset or tired, singing my favorite songs helps me relax and regain energy.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意语法结构,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并明确表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but my Sunday school teacher taught us how to sing Bible songs, which has helped me improve my singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但句子结构不够完整,存在语法错误。建议使用更准确的语法结构,避免重复,并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because she takes care of my daughter while I study English. She does a lot for our family, so singing for her is my way to show appreciation.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中发音错误严重("seeing"应为"singing"),表达不清晰且语法混乱。建议加强发音练习,理清思路,使用完整句子表达观点,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. However, it depends on the type of song; positive and uplifting lyrics usually make people feel happier.
× Yes, I like seeing uh, because it can cheers me up.
✓ Yes, I like singing, because it can cheer me up.
动词like后面接动名词形式,应该用singing而不是seeing。动词cheers应为原形cheer,因为can后面接动词原形。
× because it can cheers me up.
✓ because it can cheer me up.
情态动词can后面动词用原形,不能用第三人称单数形式cheers。
× I will choose a thing like that. I like, uh, and I will see it.
✓ I will choose a thing like that. I like, uh, and I will sing it.
根据上下文,应该是喜欢唱歌,动词用动名词singing或动词原形sing,这里用动词原形sing更合适。
× No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I, I go to the Sunday school, uh, my Sunday school teacher told us how to sing the Bible songs.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I went to Sunday school. My Sunday school teacher told us how to sing Bible songs.
描述过去发生的动作,动词go应使用过去式went。
× I go to the Sunday school
✓ I went to Sunday school
Sunday school前不需要冠词the,且动词时态应为过去式went。
× So maybe I think it helps, it helps me to sing the other.
✓ So maybe I think it helps me to sing better.
句中it helps后应直接接宾语me,且the other用法不当,应改为better表示更好。
× she really do a lot of things for my family
✓ she really does a lot of things for my family
主语she为第三人称单数,谓语动词do应改为does。
× so that I can have free time to do the things.
✓ so that I can have free time to do things.
do后面不需要加定冠词the,直接用things即可。
× Yes, I think, uh, seeing can definitely bring happiness to people.
✓ Yes, I think, uh, singing can definitely bring happiness to people.
动词like后面接动名词形式,应该用singing而不是seeing。
× Uh, but I think it, it more depends on the type of thing and some words in The thing is not is negative, it's will be done.
✓ Uh, but I think it more depends on the type of song, and some words in the song are not positive, it will be bad.
句子中the thing用法不当,应改为the song;is not is错误,应改为are not;表达应更清晰,避免语法错误。