Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child because it helps me express my emotions and makes me feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I have been focusing on learning piano instead.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不准确，语法错误明显，且内容不完整。建议明确说明想为谁唱歌，并用连贯的句子表达。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing with the group Lolly Talk because I admire their singing style and enjoy their music.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议用更准确的句子表达唱歌带来快乐的观点。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express themselves and enjoy the moment.

× I fairly like to sing when I was very young and right now I'd like to sing too.

✓ I have liked to sing since I was very young and right now I'd like to sing too.

这里时态使用不当。句子中提到过去的时间点“when I was very young”，应使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的动作或状态。建议使用“have liked”表示从过去到现在一直喜欢唱歌。

× So it's because I let you remind all the people I have a great quality of my sound, so I want to share my singing sound.

✓ So it's because I want to remind all the people that I have a great quality in my voice, so I want to share my singing.

句中“let you remind all the people”用法错误，表达不清晰。应使用“want to remind”表达想让大家知道的意思。同时，“quality of my sound”表达不自然，改为“quality in my voice”更合适。

× I usually don't learn how to sing because I have piano for my class so I cannot learn how to sing.

✓ I usually don't learn how to sing because I have piano classes, so I cannot learn how to sing.

“have piano for my class”表达不准确，应改为“have piano classes”表示上钢琴课。整体时态使用正确。

× They Sing is so good.

✓ They sing so well.

“They Sing is so good”中“Sing”不应大写且用作名词不当，应为动词形式“sing”。主语是复数“they”，动词用原形“sing”。“so good”应改为副词“so well”修饰动词。

× When people randomly pick one to sing, I think it's bring happiness to me.

✓ When people randomly pick someone to sing, I think it brings happiness to me.

“it's bring”时态错误，应为第三人称单数现在时“it brings”。“pick one to sing”表达不自然，改为“pick someone to sing”更合适。