Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid redundancy and be more specific about the emotions you express through singing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it brings me peace and calmness. For instance, singing instantly lifts my mood and allows me to express various emotions, such as happiness and sadness, effectively communicating my feelings to others.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer with clearer structure and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'improved my mind' and be more specific about what you learned in the singing classes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I took singing classes as a child, which were calming and relaxing. These classes helped me express my feelings more deeply and taught me techniques beyond just vocal exercises, improving my overall understanding of singing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'carry and survey her emotions'. Be specific about the emotions you want to express.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mother because she is my role model. Through songs, I want to express my gratitude and deep affection for her, showing how much she means to me.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the idea well but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Avoid filler phrases like 'You know' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: I believe singing can bring happiness to most people because it provides relaxation and joy. Listening to various genres allows individuals to immerse themselves in music, which refreshes their mood and makes them feel better quickly.

× I can express different kind of emotion, sadness, happiness through singing.

✓ I can express different kinds of emotions, sadness, happiness through singing.

The phrase 'different kind of emotion' is incorrect because 'different' requires a plural noun when referring to multiple types. Therefore, 'different kinds of emotions' is the correct form.

× I feel like I can really communicate through singing with other people rather than just talking about my feelings.

✓ I feel like I can really communicate through singing with other people rather than just talking about my feelings.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× It helped me communicate my feeling deeply with others and it really improved my mind.

✓ It helped me communicate my feelings deeply with others and it really improved my mind.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions being communicated.

× I really had knowledge about singing that was rather than just about vocal and speaking thoughts.

✓ I really had knowledge about singing that was more than just about vocals and speaking thoughts.

The phrase 'rather than just about vocal and speaking thoughts' is awkward and unclear. 'More than just about vocals and speaking thoughts' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'vocal' should be plural 'vocals' to match the context.

× I would like to sing songs that carry and survey her emotions that I have hold for her for all the years that I've been with her.

✓ I would like to sing songs that carry and convey the emotions that I have held for her for all the years that I've been with her.

The word 'survey' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'convey' meaning to express. Also, 'have hold' should be 'have held' to use the correct past participle form. 'Emotions' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular emotions.

× I would like to express my gratitude and emotion to her through singing.

✓ I would like to express my gratitude and emotions to her through singing.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings.

× I think it really depends on the person, but generally for most of the people, singing can bring a sense of relaxation, sense of happiness.

✓ I think it really depends on the person, but generally for most people, singing can bring a sense of relaxation and a sense of happiness.

The phrase 'most of the people' is better expressed as 'most people'. Also, 'sense of relaxation, sense of happiness' should be connected with 'and' for clarity.

× You know, listening to different songs, genres that you are able to be indulged in really helps your mood, make it refreshed and you feel a lot better instantly.

✓ You know, listening to different songs and genres that you are able to indulge in really helps your mood, makes it refreshed, and you feel a lot better instantly.

The phrase 'that you are able to be indulged in' is incorrect; it should be 'that you are able to indulge in' because 'indulge' is an active verb here. Also, 'helps your mood, make it refreshed' should be 'helps your mood, makes it refreshed' to maintain subject-verb agreement.