Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing very much because I think my voice is not good. Also, during music lessons at school, we rarely had time to sing because other subjects took priority.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明学习内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned some basic singing techniques in music class. However, singing was only a small part of the lessons because we also studied other topics in the music book.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了情感，但语法和词汇使用不准确。建议注意语法结构，使用更准确的词汇，并完整表达想法。

Ví dụ: If I had the chance to sing for someone, it would be my parents because I want to show my gratitude to them. Even though my voice is not very good, the song would come from my heart.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但有词汇错误（如'scared'应为'skilled'），建议注意词汇准确性，并适当简化表达。

Ví dụ: Of course, beautiful songs can make people feel happier. I believe the key is having skilled singing techniques so that your voice matches the tune and rhythm. When singing sounds pleasant and harmonious, it can lift people's mood and bring them joy.

× Well I seldom things because my voice is not soundable and our in our music lesson lesson are always occupied by other main lessons teacher while I was studying.

✓ Well, I seldom sing because my voice is not good and our music lessons are always occupied by other main lesson teachers while I was studying.

这里'seldom things'是不正确的搭配，应该用动词'sing'表示唱歌。'lesson lesson'重复，应改为'lessons'。'teacher'应为复数'teachers'，因为指多个老师。

× Well I seldom things because my voice is not soundable and our in our music lesson lesson are always occupied by other main lessons teacher while I was studying.

✓ Well, I seldom sing because my voice is not good and our music lessons are always occupied by other main lesson teachers while I was studying.

'soundable'不是正确的形容词，应该用'good'或'pleasant'来形容声音。

× Is Spot Ferry limited only in the music classroom? Our teacher will teach us some basic techniques or skills of singing, but we need to study different part of the music book, so singing is only a bit of the content.

✓ Is singing limited only to the music classroom? Our teacher teaches us some basic singing techniques or skills, but we need to study different parts of the music book, so singing is only a small part of the content.

句子结构不清晰，'Is Spot Ferry'应为'Is singing'。'different part'应为复数'different parts'。'only a bit of the content'应改为'only a small part of the content'更合适。

× Is Spot Ferry limited only in the music classroom? Our teacher will teach us some basic techniques or skills of singing, but we need to study different part of the music book, so singing is only a bit of the content.

✓ Is singing limited only to the music classroom? Our teacher will teach us some basic techniques or skills of singing, but we need to study different parts of the music book, so singing is only a small part of the content.

'limited only in'应改为'limited only to'，表示限制在某个范围内。

× Is Spot Ferry limited only in the music classroom? Our teacher will teach us some basic techniques or skills of singing, but we need to study different part of the music book, so singing is only a bit of the content.

✓ Is singing limited only to the music classroom? Our teacher will teach us some basic techniques or skills of singing, but we need to study different parts of the music book, so singing is only a small part of the content.

'different part'应为复数'different parts'，因为指多个部分。

× If I have the chance to sing to someone, it must be my parents because during the past 20 years I have never got the chance to express my gratitude to them by singing a song.

✓ If I have the chance to sing for someone, it must be my parents because during the past 20 years I have never had the chance to express my gratitude to them by singing a song.

'sing to someone'应改为'sing for someone'，表示为某人唱歌。

× If I have the chance to sing to someone, it must be my parents because during the past 20 years I have never got the chance to express my gratitude to them by singing a song.

✓ If I have the chance to sing for someone, it must be my parents because during the past 20 years I have never had the chance to express my gratitude to them by singing a song.

'have never got'时态不正确，应该用现在完成时'have never had'。

× Although my voice may not soundable but that's from my.

✓ Although my voice may not sound good, but it's from my heart.

句子结构错误，'Although'和'but'不能同时使用。'soundable'应改为'sound good'。句尾不完整，补充完整表达。

× Although my voice may not soundable but that's from my.

✓ Although my voice may not sound good, but it's from my heart.

'soundable'不是正确的形容词，应使用'sound good'。

× Although my voice may not soundable but that's from my.

✓ Although my voice may not sound good, but it's from my heart.

'that's from my'缺少量词或名词，应该补充完整，如'my heart'。

× Of course, beautiful songs can definitely make people feel happier. I believe the key is having scared singing techniques so that your voice perfectly matches the tune and rhyme.

✓ Of course, beautiful songs can definitely make people feel happier. I believe the key is having skilled singing techniques so that your voice perfectly matches the tune and rhyme.

'scared'是'害怕'的意思，应该用'skilled'表示'熟练的'。

× When the singing sounds pleasant and harmonious, it can really fit people's mood and bring them joy.

✓ When the singing sounds pleasant and harmonious, it can really suit people's mood and bring them joy.

'fit'用法不当，应该用'suit'表示'适合'。