Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了个人喜好，但语言不够自然，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I don't really like singing because I'm not very good at it. However, I enjoy listening to music and sometimes sing quietly when I'm alone.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在问题。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因，避免模糊表达。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually just try to imitate singers, which might be why I'm not very good at singing.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够相关且表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，简洁明了地说明原因，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I don't usually sing for anyone because I'm not confident in my singing. Instead, I prefer to express my feelings through words or gifts.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，内容较丰富，但有语法错误和重复。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it helps them relax and reduce stress. When negative feelings disappear, people usually feel more joyful.

× But compared to singing I prefer just listening songs and sing it by my by myself when there are few people.

✓ But compared to singing, I prefer just listening to songs and singing them by myself when there are few people.

这里'songs'是复数，动词前需要加介词'to'，且'sing it'应改为'singing them'，因为'songs'是复数，代词也应对应复数。

× Actually not when singing, I just following the singer.

✓ Actually not when singing, I just follow the singer.

动词'follow'在此句中应使用一般现在时，不能用动名词形式'following'。

× So I think this is the reason about I'm not good at singing.

✓ So I think this is the reason why I'm not good at singing.

'reason'后面应接'why'引导的从句，而不是'about'。

× I won't make my son as a gift to others.

✓ I won't use my singing as a gift to others.

原句中'my son'显然是错误的代词使用，应表达“我不会把我的歌声当作礼物送给别人”，故改为'use my singing'。

× When singing people will feel more relaxed and and less pressure.

✓ When singing, people will feel more relaxed and less pressured.

'pressure'是名词，形容词形式应为'pressured'，且句首应加逗号分隔状语。

× So when these negative emotions gone away, gone with the sun, people will feel happy.

✓ So when these negative emotions have gone away, gone with the sun, people will feel happy.

此处缺少助动词'have'，构成现在完成时态，表示动作已经完成。