Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood when I feel down. For example, singing my favorite songs gives me energy and helps me cope with stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to answer directly and use proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young. My parents enrolled me in a singing class that I attended every weekend. It was a great way to develop my singing skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Use more natural expressions and linking words to explain your reasons clearly and specifically.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my parents and friends because they are important to me. Singing for them makes me feel happy, and I hope it brings them comfort and joy as well.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to contrast ideas. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: I believe singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song. For instance, singing cheerful songs can lift people's spirits, while sad songs might make them feel more emotional.

× Actually well you know I am a big fan or a saying songs.

✓ Actually, well, you know I am a big fan of singing songs.

The preposition 'or' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to express liking something is 'of'. Use 'fan of' not 'fan or'.

× Actually I have a big friends of singing songs because I think singing can make me relax and when I in depression they can give me small power for to deal with something.

✓ Actually, I have many friends who like singing songs because I think singing can make me relax, and when I am depressed, it can give me a little strength to deal with things.

'a big friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'when I in depression' lacks the verb 'am' and 'they' is unclear; 'it' referring to singing is better. 'small power for to deal with something' is awkward; 'a little strength to deal with things' is clearer.

× Oh, actually, when I was young, my parents take on a senior class with me and when I I'm in my weekend story, I often go to there to take a singing class.

✓ Oh, actually, when I was young, my parents took me to a senior class, and on weekends, I often went there to take a singing class.

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' to match 'was young'. 'when I I'm in my weekend story' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'on weekends'. 'go to there' is incorrect; 'went there' is correct past tense and no 'to' needed before 'there'.

× I think it's a good way to acquire the skills, the singing.

✓ I think it's a good way to acquire singing skills.

The phrase 'the skills, the singing' is awkward and incorrect. 'Singing skills' is the correct noun phrase. Also, no comma is needed.

× Actually I strongly sing for my parents or my friends because I think they are an intentional part of my life and they always make me feel comfort or make me feel more well-being so I want to sing for them.

✓ Actually, I like to sing for my parents and my friends because I think they are an important part of my life, and they always make me feel comfortable and improve my well-being, so I want to sing for them.

'strongly sing for' is incorrect; 'like to sing for' is better. 'intentional part' should be 'important part'. 'make me feel comfort' should be 'make me feel comfortable'. 'make me feel more well-being' is awkward; 'improve my well-being' is better.

× Actually I think it depends on the tones of saying or the songs because you know when you are singing or emotional like happy songs, it may be bring your happiness and in contrast if you're seeing the depress you.

✓ Actually, I think it depends on the tone of the singing or the songs because, you know, when you are singing emotional songs like happy songs, it may bring you happiness, and in contrast, if you're singing depressing songs, you may feel sad.

'tones of saying' should be 'tone of the singing'. 'may be bring your happiness' is incorrect; 'may bring you happiness' is correct. 'if you're seeing the depress you' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'if you're singing depressing songs, you may feel sad'.