Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "It helps" and correct minor errors such as "get out out" and "So I see" which is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a more structured response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and anxiety. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing my favourite songs, which lifts my mood and helps me forget negative feelings.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains some hesitations and repetitions such as "classes classes" and "for for me." Try to avoid filler words and repeated words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I prefer to spend my time on other hobbies like fitness. I don't think attending singing classes would be a valuable use of my time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as "if my friend forces to me to sing" and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself to relax and feel good because I enjoy it. Sometimes, if my friends encourage me, I sing for them since they say I have a good voice.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but includes hesitations and minor errors like "all of this dress" instead of "stress." Try to avoid filler words and correct vocabulary mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear, concise response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Personally, it helps me improve my mood and forget the stress and pressure from work, so I think it can have a positive effect on others as well.

× Whenever I'm free, I just try to sing my favorite song.

✓ Whenever I'm free, I just try singing my favorite song.

The verb 'try' when followed by an activity that is experimented with or tested is commonly followed by the '-ing' form (gerund). Using 'try singing' suggests experimenting with singing, which fits the context better than the base form 'try to sing'.

× It helps me to get out out of the all of the bad emotions or feelings that I'm facing.

✓ It helps me to get out of all the bad emotions or feelings that I'm facing.

The phrase 'get out out of the all of the' contains repetition and incorrect article usage. The correct preposition is 'out of' and the article 'the' before 'all' is unnecessary. Removing the repeated 'out' and the extra 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In Canadian English, 'learned' is the preferred past participle form over 'learnt'. Using 'learned' aligns with standard Canadian English usage.

× I feel that spending time on learning, uh singing through classes classes is not valuable for for me.

✓ I feel that spending time learning singing through classes is not valuable for me.

The phrase 'spending time on learning' is less natural than 'spending time learning'. Also, the repeated words 'classes classes' and 'for for' are errors. Removing these repetitions and adjusting the preposition improves clarity and correctness.

× I do sing like if my friend forces to me to sing as he found that my voice is good.

✓ I do sing if my friend forces me to sing because he finds that my voice is good.

The phrase 'forces to me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forces me'. Also, 'like if' is unnecessary and 'found' should be 'finds' to match the present tense context. Replacing 'as' with 'because' clarifies the causal relationship.

× I, I can say that to sing, uh, can bring joy in the life of people.

✓ I can say that singing can bring joy to people's lives.

The phrase 'to sing, uh, can bring joy in the life of people' is awkward. Using the gerund 'singing' as the subject is more natural. Also, 'bring joy to people's lives' is the correct collocation rather than 'in the life of people'.

× Singing helps me to get in a better mood to forget all of this dress and anxiety and the pressure of work that I'm carrying.

✓ Singing helps me to get into a better mood and forget all of this stress, anxiety, and the pressure of work that I'm carrying.

The correct preposition is 'get into' a mood, not 'get in'. Also, 'dress' is a typo and should be 'stress'. Adding 'and' before 'forget' improves sentence flow.