Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时有重复表达（"I really I really"），影响流畅性。建议避免重复，简洁表达观点，并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it and often feel shy singing in front of others. However, I really enjoy listening to music, such as pop and classical, which helps me relax and brighten my day.

Gợi ý: 回答内容与前一题重复，缺乏新信息。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用连接词丰富内容，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken some singing lessons before. Although I'm not confident in my singing skills, I enjoy learning because it helps me appreciate music more deeply.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误（"helps me relaxed"应为"helps me relax"），且内容重复。建议注意语法准确，避免重复，并直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and lack confidence. Instead, I prefer to enjoy music by listening to it alone or with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，表达清晰且有逻辑。建议增加具体例子或个人经历，使内容更丰富具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. For example, when I sing along to my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed and joyful.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it and I often feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others. But I really I really like listening to music like pop music and classical music that helps me feel relaxed and brighten my daily life.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it and I often feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others. But I really like listening to music like pop music and classical music that helps me feel relaxed and brighten my daily life.

句子中出现了重复的“I really”，属于多余的词语，应删除以保持句子简洁。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing, but I'm not very good at it and I often feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others. But I really enjoy listening to music like pop music and classical music that helps me relax and broaden my daily life.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing, but I'm not very good at it and I often feel a bit shy when I sing in front of others. But I really enjoy listening to music like pop music and classical music that helps me relax and brighten my daily life.

原句中使用了“broaden my daily life”，搭配不当，应使用“brighten my daily life”表示“使生活更美好”。

× Sorry, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing. I often feel a bit shy when standing in front of others. However, I really enjoy listening to music such as pop music and classical music which helps me relaxed.

✓ Sorry, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing. I often feel a bit shy when standing in front of others. However, I really enjoy listening to music such as pop music and classical music which helps me relax.

“helps me relaxed”中“relaxed”应为动词原形“relax”，因为“help”后面接动词时用动词原形。

× I often feel a bit shy when standing in front of others.

✓ I often feel a bit shy when I am standing in front of others.

“when standing”缺少主语，完整表达应为“when I am standing”，使句子结构完整。