Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại nhạc bạn thích.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially soft music, because it helps me relax and recharge my energy. Additionally, singing allows me to develop my performance skills for the stage.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể về quá trình học hát.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in secondary school because music was a compulsory subject. I found it very interesting and enjoyed practicing regularly.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn muốn hát cho gia đình.

Ví dụ: I want to sing with my family because they are very good singers and confident on stage or at karaoke. Singing with them will help me improve my skills and enjoy quality time together.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ví dụ: I believe singing can bring happiness because when people sing cheerful songs together, it helps them relax and feel joyful.

× I adore singing, mostly some soft music because when I'm singing I feel relaxed and recharge my battery.

✓ I adore singing, mostly soft music because when I'm singing I feel relaxed and recharge my battery.

The word 'some' is unnecessary before 'soft music' because 'soft music' is an uncountable noun here. Removing 'some' makes the sentence more natural.

× I learned how to sing when I was a student at secondary school because music is compulsory subject.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a student at secondary school because music is a compulsory subject.

The noun 'subject' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× So I learned and I felt is really interesting and fascinating, so I learned to consider.

✓ So I learned, and I felt it was really interesting and fascinating, so I decided to continue.

The original sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and is unclear. Adding 'it was' clarifies the feeling, and 'decided to continue' replaces 'learned to consider' for clarity.

× I want to sing with my family because my family sing very well and they always confident to sing on stage or karaoke.

✓ I want to sing with my family because my family sings very well and they are always confident to sing on stage or karaoke.

'Family' is a singular collective noun and requires the singular verb 'sings'. Also, 'confident' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× Therefore I want to sing for them to improve my skill and.

✓ Therefore, I want to sing for them to improve my skills.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a period and correcting 'skill' to plural 'skills' makes it complete and natural.

× From my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing some happy song, many people can understand and they can sing follow follow to the to me and it can help them to relax and happier.

✓ From my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing a happy song, many people can understand and sing along with me, and it can help them relax and be happier.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Some happy song' should be 'a happy song'; 'sing follow follow to the to me' is corrected to 'sing along with me'; 'help them to relax and happier' is corrected to 'help them relax and be happier' for grammatical accuracy.