Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and 'mmm'. Also, be more specific about why singing relaxes you and how it connects you with others. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax after a busy day and gives me a break from studying. Moreover, singing allows me to connect with other people and share joyful moments together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Explain why you haven't learned formally and how you enjoy singing informally.

Ví dụ: Although I love singing, I have never taken formal lessons. I usually sing at home or with my friends because I enjoy it as a hobby and don't feel the need for professional training.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you want to sing for that person. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler sounds.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my cousin because she is also my best friend. When I sing with her, I feel comfortable and free to express myself without worrying about being judged.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct opinion and support it with specific examples. Avoid filler words and finish your sentences fully to make your point clear.

Ví dụ: I believe singing can bring happiness to people, but it depends on the individual. For me, singing is very important because when I feel stressed or upset, singing helps me feel better and relax.

× Yes, of course I love singing because it's have me relax after uh ***** day and uh and take a MMM can take a break from studying and yeah, especially singing can maybe can connect me with other people uh and.

✓ Yes, of course I love singing because it helps me relax after a ***** day and take a break from studying. Especially, singing can maybe connect me with other people.

The phrase 'it's have me relax' is incorrect because 'have' should be in the present participle form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and contains unnecessary fillers. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Although I love singing, I never try to learn singing and I trust a sing at home and sing with my friend.

✓ Although I love singing, I have never tried to learn singing and I usually sing at home and with my friends.

The verb 'try' should be in the present perfect tense 'have tried' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. Also, 'trust a sing' is incorrect; likely intended 'just sing'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× Yeah because I don't want to uh, do something on singing.

✓ Yeah, because I don't want to do anything related to singing.

The phrase 'do something on singing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'related to' or 'about' when referring to topics or activities. Also, 'anything' fits better than 'something' in negative sentences.

× So I just think this is 1/2 piece I like.

✓ So I just think this is a piece I like.

The phrase '1/2 piece' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. Replacing it with 'a piece' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer. Also, 'this is a piece I like' correctly uses the demonstrative pronoun 'this' with the noun 'piece'.

× MMM, it's my cousins, but also she's my MMM, cousin. Not only my best friends.

✓ MMM, they're my cousins, and she's also my cousin. Not only my best friend.

'It's my cousins' is incorrect because 'cousins' is plural and requires 'they are' or 'they're'. 'She's my cousin' is correct for singular. 'Best friends' should be singular 'best friend' if referring to one person.

× I I can when I singing with her, I can arrive and sing anything else I want.

✓ When I sing with her, I can relax and sing anything else I want.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I sing' using the base form after 'when'. 'Arrive' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'relax' fits the context better.

× She didn't complain with me.

✓ She didn't complain about me.

The verb 'complain' is followed by the preposition 'about' when indicating the subject of the complaint. 'Complain with' is incorrect.

× MMM actually, I think it's depend on each person's, uh, upon me.

✓ Actually, I think it depends on each person. As for me,

The phrase 'it's depend' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'upon me' is awkward; 'as for me' is more natural.

× And for example, when I was charged about twice the life and have some pouring, I will singing and and then I can.

✓ For example, when I was feeling down in life and had some problems, I would sing and then I could feel better.

The original sentence contains unclear phrases and incorrect verb forms. 'Was charged about twice the life' is unclear; likely intended 'was feeling down in life'. 'Have some pouring' is incorrect; 'had some problems' fits better. 'I will singing' should be 'I would sing' to indicate habitual past action. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.