Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words such as 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, avoid repeating the same idea (e.g., 'helps me to relax' and 'to feel relaxed') to make your answer more concise and effective. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my feelings. Moreover, when I feel stressed or sad, singing helps me relax and feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Avoid excessive hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. This will improve coherence and clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't have enough time to take singing lessons.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and hesitation. Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. This will make your answer more structured and natural.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like to sing for anyone because I think my voice might disturb others. Also, I don't feel relaxed when I sing in front of people.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion for a more effective answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing always makes people happy. For example, participating in concerts can make people feel more cheerful and joyful, so singing definitely brings happiness.

× I haven't I have never uh, learned, uh singing.

✓ I haven't learned singing.

The phrase 'I have never learned singing' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'learn' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' without 'have never' repeated. The correct form is 'I haven't learned singing.' This corrects redundancy and improper verb form usage.

× I have never how to sing because I'm not umm, you know, I'm, I'm, I have not enough, uh, I don't have enough time to do that and it.

✓ I have never learned how to sing because I don't have enough time to do that.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The phrase 'I have never how to sing' is missing the verb 'learned'. Also, 'I have not enough' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't have enough'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical completeness.

× I think my voice can be, can be disturbing, can be disturbing for any other people and I don't feel relaxed when I am.

✓ I think my voice can be disturbing for other people and I don't feel relaxed when I sing.

The phrase 'can be disturbing, can be disturbing' is repetitive and should be stated once. Also, 'any other people' is better expressed as 'other people'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'when I am', which is incomplete; adding 'sing' completes the thought and corrects the verb form.

× singing always make people, uh, makes people happy and uh, participating in uh, concerts, uh, make, uh, makes people uh, become more cheerful and uh, happy, uh, happy, uh, so they, uh, so it can bring happiness in.

✓ Singing always makes people happy and participating in concerts makes people become more cheerful and happy, so it can bring happiness.

The subject 'singing' is singular and requires the verb 'makes' instead of 'make'. Similarly, 'participating in concerts' is singular and requires 'makes'. The original sentence has inconsistent verb forms and redundant words, which are corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.