Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I totally regard seeing' instead of 'I consider singing'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'whenever I sing I always can feel'. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar to improve clarity and fluency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it always energizes me. I consider it one of my favorite forms of entertainment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Phrases like 'starting to plan to learn singing' are awkward; instead, say 'I am planning to learn singing soon'. Also, 'make me relaxed and unwind properly' can be simplified to 'help me relax'.

Ví dụ: Actually, I have never learned to sing before, but I am planning to start lessons soon because I think singing is a great way to relax.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. For example, 'I like to think for my mom' should be 'I would like to sing for my mom'. Also, 'she always sing a beautiful songs' should be 'she always sang beautiful songs'. The phrase 'transform our relationship' is vague; consider 'strengthen our bond'.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my mom because I remember she used to sing beautiful songs to me before bed when I was little. I believe singing for her would make her happy and strengthen our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but the phrasing is somewhat awkward, such as 'understand comprehensively to the meaningful lyrics'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, adding linking words can improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. When people sing, they not only understand the meaningful lyrics but also enjoy the melody and rhythm of the song, which brings happiness.

× Yes, I'm very into singing because whenever I sing I always can feel a lot of energy and I totally regard seeing as one of my favorite form of amusement.

✓ Yes, I'm very into singing because whenever I sing I can always feel a lot of energy and I totally regard singing as one of my favorite forms of amusement.

The phrase 'I always can feel' is awkward; 'I can always feel' is the correct word order for modal verbs. Also, 'seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. 'Form' should be plural 'forms' to agree with 'one of my favorite'.

× Actually, I have never learned it before, but I am now starting to plan to learn singing in the near future because I think it is a hobby that can always make me relaxed and unwind properly.

✓ Actually, I have never learned it before, but I am now starting to plan to learn singing in the near future because I think it is a hobby that can always help me relax and unwind properly.

The phrase 'make me relaxed' is incorrect; the verb 'make' should be followed by the base form 'relax' not the adjective 'relaxed'. 'Help me relax' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× I like to think for my mom because I can still remember that when I was little she always sing a beautiful songs before I went to bed.

✓ I like to sing for my mom because I can still remember that when I was little she always sang beautiful songs before I went to bed.

The verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang' to agree with 'she' and the past time reference. Also, 'a beautiful songs' is incorrect; 'songs' is plural so 'a' should be removed.

× I like to think for my mom because I can still remember that when I was little she always sing a beautiful songs before I went to bed.

✓ I like to sing for my mom because I can still remember that when I was little she always sang beautiful songs before I went to bed.

The phrase 'a beautiful songs' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'songs'. The article should be removed to match the plural noun.

× So I believe if I can sing for her, she will be pretty happy and we can transform our relationship.

✓ So I believe if I can sing for her, she will be pretty happy and we can transform our relationship.

No correction needed for this sentence.

× Yes, definitely. I believe when people sing a song, we can not only understand comprehensively to the meaningful lyrics, but also we can enjoy the melody and the tempo of the song.

✓ Yes, definitely. I believe when people sing a song, we can not only understand the meaningful lyrics comprehensively, but also enjoy the melody and the tempo of the song.

The preposition 'to' after 'understand comprehensively' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'understand comprehensively' is better placed as 'understand the meaningful lyrics comprehensively' for clarity and natural word order.