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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like seeing hmm when I was a child we always singing for my family and then always says I'm great so I love it.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

Yes I have because I am an art school student. We need to learn how to sing. Maybe teacher will teach you something skills for saying.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

MMM when I was a child I listening a Chinese singer Zhangji. I think she's voice is so beautiful so I love to sing.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people. I think voice or songs have a power for people. We can learn some power from sing songs.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 注意发音与句子结构,开头要直接回答考官问题,然后用一到两句具体原因或举例支持。避免无意义的填充词(如 "hmm"),并改正动词形式(singing 而非 seeing)。可练习把理由限定在一到两点,每点用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because I used to sing for my family when I was a child. My relatives always praised me, which made me more confident and eager to keep singing.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意时态与表达准确性。先直接回答(Yes, I have / No, I haven't),然后说明细节(在哪里学、学了什么、学到的技能)。避免模糊表达如 "something skills for saying",用明确短语替代,例如 "vocal techniques" 或 "breath control"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. As an art school student, we take compulsory singing classes where teachers teach vocal techniques such as breath control and pitch training.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 问题理解有偏差,应直接说明想为谁唱歌(family, friends, audience等)。注意把过去和现在分清(listening → listened),并改正所有权和代词(her voice)。回答中可举例说明为何想为某人或某类人唱歌并简短说明原因。

Ví dụ: I usually want to sing for my family because they support me. When I was a child I listened to a Chinese singer called Zhang Ji whose beautiful voice inspired me to perform for my parents.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更条理清晰并用具体理由或例子支持观点。先肯定观点,然后用一至两句说明原因或举例。纠正拼写(singing)和措辞("learn some power" 不恰当),可改为 "songs can comfort people" 或 "music can lift people's mood"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because music often lifts moods and creates emotional connections. For example, singing a cheerful song can help someone feel less stressed and more positive.

Ngữ pháp

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× Yes, I like seeing hmm when I was a child we always singing for my family and then always says I'm great so I love it.

Yes, I like singing. When I was a child we always sang for my family and they always said I was great, so I loved it.

问题类型:主谓一致与句子结构混合问题(27)。 解释(简体中文):这句有多处问题:1) “seeing” 应为 “singing”,词汇使用错误(属于动名词与拼写错误,但与主谓一致影响句子意思)。2) 原句为复合句,应拆成两句或用逗号和连接词连接。3) 时态不一致:先说现在喜欢唱歌(现在时),描述小时候的习惯要用过去习惯时态“sang”而不是进行时“singing”。4) “always says I'm great” 主词不明确且时态不对,改为 “they always said I was great”。5) 最后 “so I love it” 既然指过去经历应改为 “so I loved it” 来保持时态一致。建议:注意现在/过去时的对应关系,复合句用连词或分句表达,主语要明确并与动词形式一致。

6

× Yes I have because I am an art school student.

Yes, I have, because I am an art school student.

问题类型:现在时问题(6)。 解释(简体中文):句子结构本身主要是标点和流畅性问题。回答上一问“Have you ever learnt how to sing?” 用“Yes, I have” 是正确的,后面加原因用逗号或连词连接更自然。建议:在口语或书面语中用逗号隔开原因部分,保持句子清晰。

11

× We need to learn how to sing.

We need to learn how to sing.

问题类型:介词/搭配问题(11)。 解释(简体中文):原句语法正确,这里保留原句。只是与上一句连贯性更好,可视情境添加“because”或解释性短语。若非必改则无需修改。

8

× Maybe teacher will teach you something skills for saying.

Maybe the teacher will teach you some skills for singing.

问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式及名词搭配(8)。 解释(简体中文):错误点:1) “teacher” 前缺定冠词 “the” 或 “a”。2) “something skills” 是不可接受的搭配,应为 “some skills” 或 “something” 单独使用。3) “saying” 应为 “singing”(拼写误用)。因此改为 “the teacher will teach you some skills for singing”。建议:注意可数名词的单复数和适当的限定词,并区分相似拼写词。

6

× MMM when I was a child I listening a Chinese singer Zhangji.

When I was a child I listened to a Chinese singer, Zhangji.

问题类型:现在时/过去时使用不当(6)。 解释(简体中文):句子要表达“我小时候听过某位歌手”,应该使用过去时“listened to”。另外,动词“listen” 要搭配介词 “to” 表示听某人,名字前加逗号使信息更清晰。建议:过去经历用一般过去时,并注意动词和介词搭配。

12

× I think she's voice is so beautiful so I love to sing.

I think her voice is so beautiful, so I love to sing.

问题类型:代词使用错误(12)。 解释(简体中文):错误点:使用了缩写“she's”表示“she is”或“she has”,但此处应为所有格“her”来修饰名词 “voice”。另外两个分句之间需要逗号或连接词。建议:当要表达所属关系时使用所有格代词(my, your, his, her 等)。

13

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

问题类型:形容词/副词或词汇使用错误(13)。 解释(简体中文):这里“seeing” 是错误的词形,应为 “singing”。动名词表示一种活动作为主语时用 -ing 形式。建议:注意拼写并区分相近单词的含义。

13

× I think voice or songs have a power for people.

I think voices or songs have power for people.

问题类型:形容词/副词或词汇使用错误(13)。 解释(简体中文):问题包括:1) “voice” 单数与复数搭配不自然,改为复数 “voices” 与 “songs” 对应;2) “a power” 不需要不定冠词,通常说 “have power” 或 “have the power to do something”;3) “for people” 可保留但更自然的表达是 “bring people happiness” 或 “give people power”。建议:注意可数名词单复数的一致性及不可数名词时是否需要冠词。

8

× We can learn some power from sing songs.

We can learn some power from singing songs.

问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式(8)。 解释(简体中文):错误点:短语 “from sing songs” 中动词应使用动名词形式 “singing” 来跟随介词 “from”。另外“some power” 语义上可接受但可更自然地说 “we can get strength/inspiration from songs”。建议:介词后跟动名词,注意更自然的词汇选择以表达“从歌曲中获得力量/灵感”。

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