Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите более естественно и прямо: используйте подходящий артикль и согласование; избегайте общих фраз. Дайте короткое утверждение по теме, затем одно конкретное объяснение. Также исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, "an attractive voice" и согласование глагола).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing. I find it challenging, but people with an attractive voice who can sing well are impressive because they can move listeners and create a strong atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Дайте более точный и связный ответ: используйте правильные формы времени и выражения (например, "tried many times" → "tried several times"); избегайте повторов; добавьте краткую причину и текущее состояние.

Ví dụ: Yes, I tried taking singing lessons several times, but I realized my voice wasn't ready for formal training, so now I prefer to enjoy listening to other singers and learn from them.

Gợi ý: Структурируйте ответ: сначала короткий главный пункт, затем поддерживающая деталь. Избегайте слов-паразитов (uh) и неверных форм ("will be great" → "It would be great"); используйте связки для ясности и исправьте порядок слов.

Ví dụ: It would be great to sing for a large audience, but I would also like to perform for my family. For example, I would write a song to thank them for their support and sing it at a family gathering.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте чётко и логично: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 2–3 конкретные причины, связывая их последовательными связками. Избегайте лишних слов и ошибок согласования ("make me them happier").

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps them relax, allows emotional expression, and connects people through shared feelings. For instance, a cheerful song can lift someone's mood after a bad day.

× Yes, I really enjoy this thing.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy it.

The pronoun 'this thing' is unnatural for referring to singing; use the pronoun 'it' to refer back to the activity. Use 'it' as the object pronoun after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: say 'I really enjoy it' or 'I really enjoy singing.'

× In my opinion it's very hard, but people who have attractive voice and can sing is really something special.

✓ In my opinion it's very hard, but people who have attractive voices and can sing are really something special.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'voice' should be plural 'voices' when referring to people in general. The verb should agree with plural subject 'people ... are'. Use 'are' not 'is'. Suggestion: 'people who have attractive voices and can sing are really something special.'

× Yes, I tried for many times, but after that I understood that my voice voice is not ready for this.

✓ Yes, I tried many times, but after that I realized that my voice is not ready for this.

Use 'tried many times' instead of 'for many times'. 'Understood' is grammatically correct but 'realized' is more natural here. Remove the duplicated word 'voice'. Maintain past tense for completed attempts. Suggestion: 'I tried many times, but after that I realized that my voice is not ready for this.'

× So now I just want to listen other singers.

✓ So now I just want to listen to other singers.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object (people or music). Suggestion: 'listen to other singers.'

× Uh, will be great to sing for a big audience, but also I wanted to sing for my family and then to make music where I will be, uh, where I will thanks all my family for their support.

✓ Uh, it would be great to sing for a big audience, but I also want to sing for my family and make music where I can thank my family for their support.

Missing subject 'it' and tense/modal issues: use 'it would be great' to express desire. Change 'wanted' to 'want' to match present desire. 'Where I will be' is awkward; use 'where I can thank my family'. 'Thanks' should be 'thank' (verb). Use correct word order and modal 'would' for polite hypothetical. Suggestion: 'It would be great to sing for a big audience, but I also want to sing for my family and make music where I can thank them for their support.'

× In my opinion yes, because it's the best way to relax, to express your emotions and also you can explain your thoughts, feelings in music.

✓ In my opinion, yes, because it's the best way to relax, to express your emotions, and to convey your thoughts and feelings through music.

Parallel structure: keep verbs in same form ('to relax, to express, to convey'). 'Explain your thoughts, feelings in music' is awkward; use 'convey your thoughts and feelings through music'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: maintain parallel infinitive forms and use 'through' for medium.

× So it will attract a lot of people and will make me them happier.

✓ So it will attract a lot of people and make them happier.

Incorrect pronoun placement and unnecessary 'me': 'make them happier' is correct. Also keep parallel verb structure: 'will attract... and make...' or simply 'will attract... and make them happier.' Remove the extra 'me'. Suggestion: 'So it will attract a lot of people and make them happier.'