Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (umm) and small grammatical errors ("the tension", "learned").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood. For example, when I sing after a stressful day, my anxiety decreases and I can focus on positive thoughts, so it helps me forget my problems for a while.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar: use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give details about how you learned or plan to learn. Replace unclear words like "intuition" with "teacher" or "formally". Use correct verb forms (I learned / I am eager).

Ví dụ: I haven't had formal lessons, but I practice singing at home. I watch online tutorials and rehearse regularly, and I'm eager to take formal classes next year to improve my technique.

Gợi ý: Be natural and expand slightly with a reason and one specific detail. Avoid absolute phrases like "only way"; instead explain why singing is meaningful. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words (because, so).

Ví dụ: I'd like to sing for my first love because music helps me express emotions I find hard to say in words. For example, a simple song can communicate my gratitude and affection more clearly than a conversation.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with two specific contrasts using linking words (however, for example). Correct word choices ("some people feel uncomfortable", "others feel relaxed"). Avoid hesitations and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can make many people happy. However, people respond differently: for example, some feel relaxed and cheerful when they sing, while others might feel uncomfortable or self-conscious in public performances.

× Yes, I like singing because singing makes me happy and it makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and helps me feel relaxed.

Redundant use of 'singing' and awkward repetition of 'it makes me feel relaxed'. Replace the second clause with 'it makes me' to avoid repetition and use 'helps me feel' for natural phrasing. This fits present simple habitual tense.

× Umm the reason why I sing because it reduces my the tension in my head, the anxiety I have.

✓ The reason I sing is that it reduces the tension in my head and the anxiety I feel.

Incorrect sentence structure: 'the reason why I sing because' is ungrammatical. Use 'The reason I sing is that...' Also remove extra article 'my the tension' and combine related nouns with 'and'.

× This is the only reason that I can ignore all the problems.

✓ This is the only reason I can forget about all my problems.

Awkward phrasing 'ignore all the problems' is grammatically possible but unnatural. Use 'forget about all my problems' or 'ignore my problems'. Also dropping 'that' after 'reason' makes the sentence more natural.

× Not from a specific intuition.

✓ Not from a specific institution.

The original sentence is unclear: 'intuition' is the wrong word. If the student means formal training, use 'institution' or say 'No, not from any formal training.' Ensure the fragment becomes a complete sentence.

× I learn singing at home and I eager to learn it.

✓ I learn to sing at home and I am eager to learn more.

Use correct verb pattern 'learn to sing' instead of 'learn singing'. Also include the auxiliary verb 'am' for 'I am eager' and adjust 'learn it' to 'learn more' for clarity.

× I want to sing for my first love because singing is only way to express my feelings.

✓ I want to sing for my first love because singing is the only way to express my feelings.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'only way'. Also keep present simple to express a general truth.

× Uh, slightly think about that sinking bring happiness to some people because there are some people who have different perspective about singing, some feel get umm interrupted in singing and some feel get relaxed in singing.

✓ I think singing brings happiness to some people because people have different perspectives: some feel interrupted by singing and some feel relaxed by it.

The original is disfluent and contains word-choice errors ('slightly think about that sinking', 'sinking' instead of 'singing'). Rephrase to clear subject-verb structure: 'I think singing brings...' Use plural 'perspectives' and correct verb patterns 'feel interrupted' and 'feel relaxed'. Avoid filler words and ensure present simple tense for general statements.