Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct repetitions and minor grammar (e.g., 'remove my stress' → 'relieve my stress'). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For example, after a long, tough day I often sing along to my favorite songs to unwind, and this always lifts my mood.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and verb forms, remove filler words, and organize into one clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details (methods and purpose). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect points.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practice basic techniques and breathing exercises I find online. I sing alone mainly for enjoyment and to relieve stress, not to pursue a professional career.

Gợi ý: Clarify wording (e.g., 'I'd like to sing for' not 'thank for'), avoid redundancy ('improving better and better'), and provide one clear specific example. Keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my close friends and family because their support makes me feel confident. For example, at family gatherings I often perform a song to cheer everyone up, and their smiles encourage me to practice more.

Gợi ý: Fix grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, remove fillers, and make supporting points specific and coherent using linking words like 'for example' and 'moreover.' Limit to a clear topic sentence plus two concise reasons with examples.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Singing can boost mood and reduce stress; for example, many people feel uplifted after singing in the shower or at karaoke. Moreover, singing in choirs fosters social connections and a sense of belonging, which improves long-term wellbeing.

× No, I haven't learned to how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The phrase 'to how to sing' incorrectly combines the infinitive marker 'to' with the 'how' clause. Use either 'learned to sing' or 'learned how to sing'. In this context 'learned how to sing' is natural.

× I learn basically through techniques and breathing exercises from the Internet.

✓ I learned basic techniques and breathing exercises from the Internet.

The original mixes present simple 'learn' with past context and uses 'basically' awkwardly. Use past tense 'learned' to match 'haven't learned' context or present perfect; change 'basically' to 'basic' to modify 'techniques' as an adjective.

× I just, uh, singing alone.

✓ I just sing alone.

'Singing' is a gerund or present participle and requires an auxiliary verb here. Use simple present 'sing' to express habitual action: 'I just sing alone.' Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses.

× I'm not, uh, I don't want to be a huge singer or superstar.

✓ I don't want to be a famous singer or superstar.

Combine the clauses to avoid redundancy and use 'famous' rather than 'huge' to describe a well-known singer. Present simple 'I don't want' expresses current desire; remove the fragmented 'I'm not'.

× I just singing to, uh, enjoy and uh, remove the stress.

✓ I just sing to enjoy myself and relieve stress.

Use base verb 'sing' for habitual action, not 'singing' alone. Use 'enjoy myself' for reflexive enjoyment and 'relieve stress' is the correct collocation instead of 'remove the stress'.

× I'd like to thank for close friends and my family because their support makes me feel comfortable and confident.

✓ I'd like to thank my close friends and my family because their support makes me feel comfortable and confident.

The verb 'thank' requires a direct object (who you thank) without the preposition 'for' in this structure. Place 'my' before 'close friends' for correct noun phrase.

× Thinking for them also creates memorable and moments.

✓ Thinking about them also creates memorable moments.

Use 'thinking about' not 'thinking for' to express reflecting on people. 'Memorable and moments' is redundant; use 'memorable moments'.

× I often perform a song to cheer people up, and their smiles and encouragement motivate me to keep improving better and better.

✓ I often perform a song to cheer people up, and their smiles and encouragement motivate me to keep improving.

'Keep improving' already implies ongoing improvement; 'better and better' is redundant. Keep verb tenses consistent and concise.

× Absolutely yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people for many.

✓ Absolutely. Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people in many ways.

The phrase 'for many' is incomplete. Use 'in many ways' to specify manner. Split 'Absolutely' and 'Yes' for clarity or choose one.

× For many examples, singing releases uh happiness and uh reduce stress, which leads an immediate mood post.

✓ For example, singing releases happiness and reduces stress, which leads to an immediate mood boost.

Use 'for example' rather than 'for many examples'. 'Singing releases' and then verb must agree: 'reduces' (third-person singular). 'Leads an immediate mood post' is incorrect collocation; use 'leads to an immediate mood boost.' Remove fillers 'uh'.

× For example, people offered uplifted after singing in the shower or at karaoke night.

✓ For example, people feel uplifted after singing in the shower or at karaoke night.

'Offered uplifted' is incorrect; use 'feel uplifted'. Maintain present simple for general truth: 'people feel'.

× Moreover, singing groups such as choir or foster social connections and sense of belonging, which help long.

✓ Moreover, singing groups, such as choirs, foster social connections and a sense of belonging, which helps people in the long term.

Original is missing words and has incorrect pluralization: use plural 'choirs' and add commas. 'Foster' should be followed by objects 'social connections and a sense of belonging.' 'Which help long' is ungrammatical; use 'which helps people in the long term.' Subject-verb agreement: 'which' refers to the clause and takes singular verb 'helps' or rephrase.