Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., "it helps me focus on my work"). Keep to at most 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, after a stressful day I often sing for a few minutes, and this calms me and helps me focus on my work.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a clear reason. Use linking words like "however" or "but" when adding contrasting ideas. Fix grammar (e.g., "I have never learned formal singing"), and be specific about future intentions (when or how you will learn).

Ví dụ: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. However, I would like to learn in the future, perhaps by taking weekly classes to improve my technique and confidence.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a clear example. Use linking words such as "but" or "for example" to connect ideas. Correct grammar and pronunciation of names (e.g., movie title) and avoid hesitation. Mention when or why you sing for that person.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for my mother, especially when she is upset. For example, I sometimes sing a song from the movie 'Taare' because she loves that tune and it cheers her up.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example". Avoid repetition and simplify phrasing (e.g., "melodious voice makes people feel better").

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because music often lifts the mood. For example, listening to or singing a cheerful melody can reduce stress and make people more motivated to finish their tasks.

× Yes, I like singing because I feel relaxed when I sing a song it fills me over better way to to my work. That's why I like to sing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I feel relaxed when I sing; it helps me do my work better. That's why I like to sing.

Run-on sentence and incorrect phrasing. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. 'fills me over better way to to my work' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it helps me do my work better' to express the intended meaning. Also remove repeated 'to'.

× No, I never learned how to sing because I have lost so much interest to thinking. Song so I don't think so. I want to learn singing for future as well as present.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I lost interest in it. I want to learn to sing in the future as well as now.

'Never learned' with 'have' should be 'have never learned' for present perfect. 'have lost so much interest to thinking. Song' is unclear; use 'lost interest in it'. 'Want to learn singing' should be 'want to learn to sing'. 'for future as well as present' should be 'in the future as well as now' to match tense and preposition use.

× I don't want sing for my mother sometimes when even she is angry on me I I sing a one song that is from the movie Taurus.

✓ I don't want to sing for my mother, but sometimes when she is angry with me I sing a song from the movie Taurus.

Missing 'to' after 'want'. Use comma to separate clauses. 'angry on me' is incorrect; use 'angry with me'. 'I sing a one song' should be 'I sing a song'. 'that is from' can be simplified to 'from the movie Taurus'.

× I mean for. That song. My mother loves that song.

✓ I mean that song; my mother loves it.

Fragmented sentences: 'I mean for. That song.' are fragments. Combine into a single clear sentence: 'I mean that song' or 'I mean that song; my mother loves it.' Use 'it' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I think singing and bring happiness to people because passing by singing song with the melodious voice and listen this this, this melodious voice feels us better and happy for doing the work.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because listening to a melodious voice makes us feel better and happier while working.

Incorrect structure 'singing and bring' should be 'singing can bring'. 'passing by singing song' is unclear; use 'listening to a song' or 'listening to a melodious voice'. 'listen this' is incorrect; use 'listening to this'. 'feels us better and happy' should be 'makes us feel better and happier'. Ensure verb forms and word order are correct.