Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Nói rõ một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp. Dùng 2–3 câu hỗ trợ, có liên từ hợp lý (for example, because, and) và chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào bạn hát, thể loại bạn thích). Ví dụ: nêu mục đích (thư giãn), hoạt động kèm theo (nghe bài mới, tập phong cách ca sĩ), thời gian cụ thể (sau khi học).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after studying. For example, I often listen to new songs and try to imitate famous singers to learn different styles. I usually sing pop and ballads in the evenings for about 30 minutes.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp và từ sai (chẳng hạn 'coach' thay cho 'crotch'). Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do với linking word (because) và đề xuất thay thế (tự học, hát cho vui). Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng, không lặp từ.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because a good vocal coach is expensive and I don't have much free time. Instead, I practice singing casually at home to relax and enjoy music.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I like to sing for...). Giải thích lý do cụ thể (they appreciate music, we relax together) và cung cấp ví dụ ngắn (khi đi học về, trong buổi tụ tập). Tránh lỗi thì và chia động từ. Dùng liên từ như 'because' và 'so' hợp lý.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my friends because they are music lovers and appreciate my performances. For example, we often sing together after studying to relax and joke around during small gatherings.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp với luận điểm rõ ràng, loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và hoàn thành ý. Dùng linking words (because, so) và đưa ra lý do cụ thể (music expresses emotions, reduces stress) kèm ví dụ ngắn. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music helps people express emotions and reduce stress. For instance, singing a cheerful song can lift someone's mood after a tiring day.

× Yes, I really like singing. I think this is a a favorite habit when I when I after studying time is have me relax and I can listen many new song and I can try a famous singer.

✓ Yes, I really like singing. I think it is a favorite habit; after studying, it helps me relax, and I can listen to many new songs and try singing like a famous singer.

The sentence has multiple issues but we only correct those matching 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8) and related verb forms. Use 'singing' correctly after 'like' and 'try' takes the -ing form: 'try singing'. Also correct 'listen to' (preposition) and plural 'songs'. Suggestion: use 'try singing' not 'try a famous singer'.

× No, I have not ever learned singing because I think learn a crotch is very expensive and I don't have many time to study it. I think I just want to singing normally and in the relax.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing because I think learning from a coach is very expensive and I don't have much time to study it. I think I just want to sing casually and to relax.

Corrected issues matching 'Verb in the past participle form' (ID 9) and related verb forms: after 'have' use past participle 'learned' (already used) and we change 'learn singing' to 'learn to sing' or 'learn singing' with gerund; 'want to sing' uses infinitive not -ing. Also 'coach' not 'crotch', 'much time' for uncountable. Suggestion: use 'want to sing' and 'learn to sing' or 'learning to sing'.

× I want to singing for my friends because my friend is a music lover so I think I singing for my friend is a good idea to joke and relax after studying time is very.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because my friends are music lovers, so I think singing for them is a good way to joke and relax after studying.

Matches 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8): after 'want' use infinitive 'to sing', not 'to singing'. Use gerund 'singing' correctly in 'singing for them'. Also fix plural agreement 'friends are' and 'them'. Suggestion: use 'want to' + base verb and use gerund when the verb acts as noun.

× Yes, because music is our energy are serve uh, for a good way to uh, put uh emotions. I think uh people listen to musics is.

✓ Yes, because music is our energy and serves as a good way to express emotions. I think people listen to music for that reason.

This primarily involves word choice and verb form errors categorized as 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13). Use 'serves' (third person singular), 'express emotions' rather than 'put emotions', and 'music' is uncountable so not 'musics'. Suggestion: use 'serves as a good way to express emotions' and 'listen to music'.