List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I try making this」は「I try to make a list」の方が自然です。また、最後の質問「How much you're going to shop?」は不適切で、会話の流れを乱しています。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、冗長な部分を避けてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. This helps me avoid spending too much money and ensures I buy only what I need.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、「make a list from my work」は不自然な表現です。「make a list for my work」が適切です。また、文の繋がりをより明確にするために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。内容も具体的で効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It works very well because without it, I often forget my tasks. Therefore, making a list helps me stay organized and efficient.

Gợi ý: 「making this」という表現は不自然で、「making lists」が正しいです。また、理由の説明は理解できますが、より具体的な例や理由を加えると良いでしょう。文法の改善と語彙の多様化も必要です。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility. When you have a list, you feel obligated to finish all tasks, which can limit spontaneity. They might prefer to decide what to do at the moment.

Gợi ý: 「make this」は不自然で、「make a list」が適切です。最後の文は意味が不明瞭で、伝えたい内容がはっきりしません。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べることが重要です。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can set reminders. Unlike paper lists, phone lists help me remember tasks better and prevent me from forgetting important things.

× I try making this when I go shopping all the time.

✓ I try to make this when I go shopping all the time.

The verb 'try' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making' when expressing an attempt to do something.

× How much you're going to shop?

✓ How much are you going to shop?

In questions, the auxiliary verb 'are' should come before the subject 'you' to form the correct question structure.

× Yes, I make a list from my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

The preposition 'for' is appropriate when indicating the purpose of making a list, whereas 'from' is incorrect in this context.

× But making a list makes it really efficient for me.

✓ But making a list makes me really efficient.

The phrase 'makes it really efficient for me' is awkward; the correct expression is 'makes me really efficient' to indicate the effect on the person.

× I think some people don't like making this because they like freedom.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they like freedom.

The pronoun 'this' is unclear; it should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to specify what is being referred to.

× By making lists, you have to complete the tasks that you write on your list, so there will be less freedom.

✓ By making lists, people have to complete the tasks that they write on their lists, so there is less freedom.

Using 'you' and 'your' is less appropriate here; 'people' and 'their' generalize the statement better and maintain consistency.

× People who don't like making this would rather think and do it on that time.

✓ People who don't like making lists would rather think and do things at that time.

'This' should be 'lists' for clarity; 'on that time' is incorrect preposition usage and should be 'at that time'; 'do it' is vague and better replaced with 'do things'.

× I prefer to make this on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone.

The pronoun 'this' is unclear and should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to specify what is being referred to.

× On paper you can't set up those things, so I turn on forgetting what I wrote on the list, or maybe at least the paper.

✓ On paper, you can't set up those things, so I end up forgetting what I wrote on the list, or at least the paper.

The phrase 'I turn on forgetting' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I end up forgetting'. Also, a comma is needed after 'On paper' for clarity.