Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do make a list every time when I go to shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because I work as of one staff so it's a lot of things to do. I want to recheck everything I do to make my work like perfectly.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think most people think it's a waste of time and they can remember all the thing but sometimes it's half a bad thing happen to like if they forgot something so they can't really check it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because now like everybody have a phone and we use a phone in everyday life. So it's easy and it's very convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Instead of 'I do make a list every time when I go to shopping,' say 'Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go.' This sounds more fluent and natural in everyday English.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to make sure I don't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Try to start with a direct answer, then explain. For example, 'Yes, I make lists for work because I handle many tasks alone. This helps me double-check my work and ensure everything is done properly.' Also, avoid phrases like 'work as of one staff' which are unclear.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because I manage many tasks by myself. This helps me stay organised and make sure I don't miss anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and lacks clarity. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and believe they can remember everything. However, this can be risky because if they forget something, they have no way to check.'
Ví dụ: Some people avoid making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they trust their memory. But this can lead to mistakes if they forget important tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me.' Also, avoid filler words like 'like' and improve grammar ('everybody have' should be 'everybody has').
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me, so I can check or add items anytime.
× Yes, I do make a list every time when I go to shopping.
✓ Yes, I do make a list every time when I go shopping.
The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is a gerund and does not require the preposition 'to' after 'go'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common error with activities expressed as gerunds after 'go'. Removing 'to' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× Yes I do because I work as of one staff so it's a lot of things to do.
✓ Yes, I do because I work as one staff member so there are a lot of things to do.
The phrase 'work as of one staff' is incorrect. The preposition 'of' is unnecessary and 'staff' should be specified as 'staff member' to indicate a single person. Also, 'there are a lot of things' is more appropriate than 'it's a lot of things' because 'things' is plural. Correcting these prepositions and noun usage improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× I want to recheck everything I do to make my work like perfectly.
✓ I want to recheck everything I do to make my work perfect.
The phrase 'make my work like perfectly' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary and 'perfectly' is an adverb, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'work'. The correct adjective is 'perfect'. Therefore, 'make my work perfect' is the correct form.
× I think most people think it's a waste of time and they can remember all the thing but sometimes it's half a bad thing happen to like if they forgot something so they can't really check it.
✓ I think most people think it's a waste of time and they can remember all the things but sometimes a bad thing happens, like if they forget something so they can't really check it.
The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'all the'. Also, 'half a bad thing happen to like' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'a bad thing happens, like'. The verb 'forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to maintain consistency. These corrections fix pluralization and verb tense errors.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because now like everybody have a phone and we use a phone in everyday life.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because now, like, everybody has a phone and we use a phone in everyday life.
The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'everybody' (third person singular). This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.