Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, actually I don't make a list when I go shopping. I always remember them in my mind. I think it's more convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes I make a list before I study. I will list out what I should learn today and how to work it. I think it's really effective.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe they will think it's too much and it's not convenient and they thought it was a waste of time so they don't make a list. But for me, I think it will help you work more effectively and organized.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
When I was a kid, I prefer to make a list on the paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list in the phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然,但缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体原因和细节,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember the items in my mind. This method is more convenient for me, and it saves time since I don't have to prepare a list beforehand.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但句子结构和用词可以更自然,且缺少连接词。建议使用更地道的表达,并用连接词连接观点和理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a list before studying. I usually write down what topics I need to cover and plan how to approach them. This strategy is really effective because it helps me stay organized and focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词,并注意时态和语法的正确性。
Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it too time-consuming and inconvenient. However, I believe that making lists helps people work more effectively and stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,但时态使用不准确,且句子较长缺少连接词。建议注意时态一致性,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I preferred making lists on paper. However, with the development of technology, I now always make my lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can access them anytime I want.
× When I was a kid, I prefer to make a list on the paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list in the phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
✓ When I was a kid, I preferred to make a list on paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list on my phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
句子中描述过去的习惯动作,应该使用过去时态“preferred”而不是现在时态“prefer”。此外,“on the paper”应改为“on paper”,“in the phone”应改为“on my phone”,因为通常说“on paper”和“on phone”。