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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes I do, because that is because. I often forgot what to buy or where to go, so if I don't make a list it's very convenient.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Uh yes I do because I'm a absent minded person and I often forget what to do or where to go so it's necessary to make a list when I'm working and it helps me a lot.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Oh well, in my opinion I guess it's very bothersome and I guess they're they have good memory to memorize those tasks so they just don't need a list.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Well, I'm keen on writing on papers that is because if you ride on, you need to. Look at phones when you check it and I prefer papers.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answerが少し不自然で、'because that is because'の部分は意味が不明瞭です。また、文法的な誤り('I often forgot'は過去形でなく現在形の'I often forget'が適切)もあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べることを意識しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I often forget what to buy or where to go. Making a list helps me stay organized and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 文法的に少し不自然な部分があります('a absent minded person'は誤りで、'an absent-minded person'が正しい)。また、文が長く繋がっているため、適切な接続詞を使い、文を分けて明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because I am an absent-minded person. I often forget tasks or appointments, so making a list is necessary and it helps me a lot.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答えが少し曖昧で、'I guess'や'Oh well'が多用されているため、確信を持って話す練習が必要です。また、'they're they have good memory'は文法的に誤りです。より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people find making lists bothersome. Also, they may have a good memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で、'if you ride on, you need to. Look at phones when you check it'の部分は意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習が必要です。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because when I am on the move, it's easier to glance at a paper list than to unlock and check my phone.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I often forgot what to buy or where to go, so if I don't make a list it's very convenient.

I often forget what to buy or where to go, so if I don't make a list it's very inconvenient.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, the phrase 'it's very convenient' contradicts the context; it should be 'inconvenient' to express the problem of not making a list.

Article errors

× because I'm a absent minded person and I often forget what to do or where to go so it's necessary to make a list when I'm working and it helps me a lot.

because I'm an absent-minded person and I often forget what to do or where to go, so it's necessary to make a list when I'm working and it helps me a lot.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a vowel sound; it should be 'an'. Also, 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' when used as an adjective.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Oh well, in my opinion I guess it's very bothersome and I guess they're they have good memory to memorize those tasks so they just don't need a list.

Oh well, in my opinion, I guess it's very bothersome and I guess they have a good memory to remember those tasks, so they just don't need a list.

The phrase 'they're they have' is incorrect; it should be 'they have'. Also, 'good memory to memorize' is redundant; 'good memory to remember' is more appropriate.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I'm keen on writing on papers that is because if you ride on, you need to. Look at phones when you check it and I prefer papers.

Well, I'm keen on writing on paper; that is because if you ride on, you need to look at your phone when you check it, and I prefer paper.

The phrase 'writing on papers' is incorrect; 'writing on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'look at phones' should be 'look at your phone' for clarity and correctness. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

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