List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子结构混乱。建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because I tend to forget what I need. I either write it down or type it on my phone to remind myself.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，且重复词语影响了表达效果。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks one by one and keeps me organized.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免口语填充词。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember tasks easily. Others may feel that making lists wastes time.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing my lists on my phone because it's easy to edit and very convenient since people always carry their phones with them.

× I always forget what I need to buy when as long as I get to the shop.

✓ I always forget what I need to buy as soon as I get to the shop.

句中使用了错误的短语“when as long as”，应使用“as soon as”表示“一……就……”。这是固定搭配错误，建议记忆常用时间状语从句连接词。

× So I always need write down or type on my phone to remind me what I need by.

✓ So I always need to write down or type on my phone to remind me what I need to buy.

动词“need”后应接不定式“to write”，而非直接接动词原形；另外，“by”应为“buy”，是拼写错误。

× It is a good way to help I finish my work 1 by 1.

✓ It is a good way to help me finish my work one by one.

“help”后面应接宾格代词“me”，而非主格“I”；数字“1 by 1”应写为“one by one”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Umm, write, writing, writing a list, keep my work more organized.

✓ Umm, writing a list keeps my work more organized.

句子缺少谓语动词，且主谓不一致，应使用动名词“writing”作主语，谓语用第三人称单数“keeps”。

× I think there are a couple of three.

✓ I think there are a couple of reasons.

“a couple of”后应接复数名词，原句“three”不合适，应改为“reasons”或其他复数名词。

× Then some may have good memory, they can remember what they should do.

✓ Some may have a good memory and can remember what they should do.

原句为逗号拼接两个独立分句，属于逗号拼接错误，应使用连词“and”连接。

× Some may think making a list is umm we we wasting time.

✓ Some may think making a list is wasting time.

句中多余重复“we we”，应删除；此外，“is wasting time”结构正确。

× Compared to writing on paper, I prefer type on my phone, mainly because typing on the phone you can change it all the time.

✓ Compared to writing on paper, I prefer to type on my phone, mainly because when typing on the phone, you can change it all the time.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to type”；“typing on the phone you can change”缺少连词，应加“when”引导时间状语从句。

× People always bring their phone to go outside.

✓ People always bring their phones when they go outside.

“bring their phone to go outside”结构不完整且不自然，应改为“bring their phones when they go outside”，使句子完整且符合习惯表达。