List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且有重复表达。建议使用完整句子，避免断句过短，并且用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I don't have many things to buy. Therefore, I can easily remember what I need.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子断断续续，表达不完整。建议用完整句子回答问题，并用连接词连接观点和原因，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have made lists for my work before. Planning my timetable is very important because I am not good at managing time. However, with the help of a list, I can stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单，句子断裂且缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子表达观点，并举例说明为什么有些人觉得做清单没用。

Ví dụ: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they feel it doesn't always help them stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达偏好，并说明原因，避免句子断裂。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient to check them anywhere, while writing on paper is less practical.

× Not really. Because I don't have. So much things to buy.

✓ Not really, because I don't have so many things to buy.

句子结构不完整，'Because I don't have.' 是不完整的句子，应与前句合并，同时 'so much things' 应改为 'so many things'，因为 'things' 是可数名词。

× So much things to buy.

✓ So many things to buy.

'things' 是可数名词，修饰可数名词复数时应使用 'many' 而非 'much'。

× I can remember the things I needed.

✓ I can remember the things I need.

'can remember' 表示现在能力，后面应使用现在时 'need'，保持时态一致。

× And therefore, I think this makes me shopping.

✓ And therefore, I think this helps me with shopping.

'makes me shopping' 结构不正确，应使用 'helps me with shopping' 来表达帮助购物的意思。

× Yes, I did before.

✓ Yes, I did before.

此句无语法错误，符合过去时态。

× Because I'm not those types of people who can. Maintain their time very well.

✓ Because I'm not the type of person who can maintain their time very well.

'I'm not those types of people' 结构错误，应为单数 'the type of person'，且句子不应断开。

× And with the help of a list. I can.

✓ And with the help of a list, I can.

句子不完整且断开，应合并为完整句子。

× People refused to organize a list because it can be time consuming.

✓ People refuse to organize a list because it can be time-consuming.

'refused' 应为现在时 'refuse'，且 'time consuming' 应连写为复合形容词 'time-consuming'。

× And. Also, making a list is not always helpful for them.

✓ Also, making a list is not always helpful for them.

句子中断开不当，应去掉多余的句号。

× From my opinion, I prefer dropping lists.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer making lists.

'From my opinion' 应为 'In my opinion'，'dropping lists' 用词不当，应为 'making lists'。

× Done on my phone because it is rather convenient that I can just look at them.

✓ done on my phone because it is rather convenient; I can just look at them.

句子结构不完整，应连接为完整句子。

× While writing on paper is more.

✓ While writing on paper is less convenient.

句子不完整，缺少比较内容，应补充完整表达。